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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago
(Jake,) “She didn’t matter.”
“You should know that about me.”
*Showing panels of Jake’s memories of her, their appearances looking shadowy and vague, his dark, unless in contact with her light figure.*
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago

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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago
Paris) “It’s dissappointing you can’t move on…”
“Given how heartless you were with that girl of yours.”
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago

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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago
(Paris) “Well, it’s kinda hard not to… given it’s y…”
(Jake) “SHUT UP!”
(Paris, deadpan) “You want to argue?”
(Jake)
*sighs*
“Nevermind”
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago

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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago
(Jake, very angry) “Don’t bring him into this.”
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago

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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago
Jake misses the ledge being reminded of this person and catches himself, showing that this is a touchy issue for him.
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago

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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago
(Paris) “regardless, you’d better not fail.”
“I don’t want a repeat of fabian.”
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago

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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago

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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago
(Paris) “Why’d i need to do that? the gravitys low and I spent more than you’re worth on those bionics.”
(Jake) “point taken.”
(Jake, irritated) “Better be prepared to spend more money if i fall.”
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago
(Ok to preface the next 2 pages (7&8) they’re both different versions of the same part, but I accidentally put them both in. I was thinking of keeping both somehow as a way to help indicate the travel of Jake)
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago

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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago
(Paris) “Is it behind some mountains?”
(Jake) “Yep.”
“Did you pack me anything for climbing?”
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago

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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago
(Paris) “how’s the nav?”
(Jake) “I’m about to find out.”
*taps side of helmet*
“I see the target.”
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Wanna critique my first crack at a comic? in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago

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