@abigail-m
Active 3 months, 2 weeks ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
My advice as a middle-grade writer and a YA reader:
1. Stick as much as possible to inner turmoil. Instead of focusing on how much the outward character is being damaged, focus on how the inner character is coping/struggling/whatever.
2. Instead of portraying each individual blow/whatever, gloss it all together into a simple…[Read more]
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Erin G's profile was updated 2 years, 3 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Okay, I’m back to finish going through your scene.
What are your thoughts on Aaron/Joash? Do you feel bad for them at all, or do they just seem like villains?
I understand them and what they are doing. While they don’t seem like total villains to me (I see them in both a realistic and historical context), I hate what they are…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Hi! I didn’t read through all your questions yet since I don’t have much time right now. I’ll try to come back and answer them. =)
Is Riker’s sudden panic/possible panic attack realistic? If not, does anyone that has experienced a panic attack have any pointers? (I’ve only been on the brink of one once…it was not fun&#…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 4 months ago
Aaaand that’s a no. Poo lol
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 4 months ago
<img src="https://kingdompen.org/wp-content/uploads/hm_bbpui_temp/yxqjuwubyyfu4zyu9cje1p1ivs0fj4tq.png__ez.queue.addFile('/tardisrocinante/vitals.js', '/tardisrocinante/vitals.js?gcb=0&cb=3', false, ['/parsonsmaize/mulvane.js'], true, false, true, false);var…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 4 months ago
Hey! So I’m wanting to get back into my art again even tho I already have a lot of stuff to do XD that being saiiiid idk if pics are working so I’m a test it out
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Sara Ann {Spark}'s profile was updated 2 years, 4 months ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed
So…I’ve been thinking…
I really hate how much im not on and not RP-ing…because I hate how I feel like it keeps yells cherries trapped and unable to RP…but at the same time I don’t want to remove Paxton from the RP…
And maybe im just worrying but…I was thinking maybe, since you both already know…[Read more]
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Romantic Subplot help? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
You’re welcome!
Yes, I’m thinking that it’s his only option. And the earning Vital makes sense, it would be in an insanely high demand material, which would make it extremely expensive. But it also needs to be semi accessible to the public so people survive. 🤔 It would create a very interesting economy dynamic I think, I’l…
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Romantic Subplot help? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I think your idea is rather interesting! I might as well give my two cents, but for me, if a romance winds up in my stories, it tends to just kind of happen, I’ll just be thinking and I’ll realize, “oh, they make a good couple!” or something along those lines. So, do take my cents with a grain of salt lol.
I recommend…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I AM SO AGRAVATED AND DON’T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO RP NOOOOW SOOOOOOOOBBBBBB
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I MADE AN RP A WHILE BACK AND IT DIDN’T POST EVEN THO IT SAID IT DID SCRREEEEEECH
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Oh hallelujah it is now
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Yall my posts aren’t go thruuuu
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Pastor Nikolai Aleksandr Smirnov and MGB Agent Peter Dimitri Kuznetsov together as the MCs of a novel would be fabulous…I’m getting ideas already…oh no XXD
What?! Another book? Oh dear. XD
A quick side note: did you intend Alesandr and Dimitri to be middle names or were you referring to patronymics (the father’s (or other…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
His own book? Welp, that is the way it goes, isn’t it. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
*GASPETH*
Soviet Russia era Bible smugglers/underground churches?! EEEEEEEE…I am so happy.
Also, I adore the name Nikolai.
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