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KattheWriter replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
(i still cringe at the beginning of this, and some of my wording. ik I’ll change stuff in draft 2! lolll)
(tw- mention of wounds?)
Chapter 5
Roger
I pulled out my sword and in a few quick strides was by his side, my sword pointing at his throat. “I SAID ENOUGH!” Anger burned through me, and I wanted to kill him right then and there, for…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin sure!!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Arabella
Dietrich seemed so…so upset. And Adolphus was utterly silent, not even looking her in the eye now…
“What is it?” She asked softly, laying a gentle hand on Dietrich’s arm. She watched as he flinched and immediately removed her hand, remembering when Paxton had done the same their first meeting.
“Please…you can tell me.”
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
November
Zlatan…he was…
Gone…
November felt his pulse spike, anxiety hitting him like a stone. He wasn’t sure if he could keep his stomach in check any longer.
“Where did he go?” Jezyk cried, eyes wide.
November just stared, eyes wide, face pale. Riker was gasping, head turning to the left and right, as if looking to…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
AND THEN return to Hans and Erich lol
OOF…
and then November will just be with Fin and Hans and Riker and Erich (not that that’s a bad thing because he has Riker and Fin but….Hans and Erich? Cuz Erich rn has yet to be redeemed)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 hey do u wanna RP? I figure Zlatan and Vulk can…disappear kinda like when everyone got separated and everyone can freak out for a second XD….
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@princesachronicle22 nope just us! @esther-c
Jocelyn
A young lady stood amongst the now broken pieces of doorframe, eyes wide. Everyone stared for a moment, before Jocelyn let out a loud, “Oh!”
She smiled, approaching gingerly. “Hello! I’m Jocelyn! Though, you can call me Lyn if you like.”
The stranger continued to stare at Lyn’s outstretche…[Read more]
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Elanor replied to the topic Autumn in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
thanksss
Thank you!! And yes I did make it. I make all my graphics on Canva, the app on my phone or laptop. Free version. 🙂 I’ve been using it since i’ve been writing and really love it. So now I make the graphics for the pins for KP’s pinterest 😀
Ok, awesome! Thanks so much!!!!
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Elanor replied to the topic Autumn in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
Cool! It’s not my best but here you are. 🙂
Fall
Fall’s my favourite over all other seasons
And for that, there’s several simple reasons.
The air smells so cold and crisp.
The wind’s whispers drive leaves into drifts
I can wear cozy sweaters without getting hot
A book and mug of black tea just hit the spot.
With school…[Read more]
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Elanor replied to the topic A kitten in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
So sweet! Nailed it.
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Elanor replied to the topic Autumn in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
@charityanne
Love it!I wrote a poem about Autumn a little while back. Do you want to read it?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@princesachronicle22 Yerp they just busted open the dining room door to get out lol
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
How old is Dante btw?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @loopylin
Corvina
Great…another person…
Corvina scowled, fists clenching.
Then again…it got the attention off of her…if she wanted, she could probably escape now. Into the shadows, shifting into her Raven form.
Ah…she probably wouldn’t even have to do that. Her shadows would probably hi…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@esther-c yea but I didn’t know what was behind the door….
GASP HEY!!!! Maybe @princesachronicle22 new healer character?! That way she can help Nyx??
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@katthewriter Nerp! It’s open for everyone! We usually just ask and such if we wanna join a certain group of other charries and such. For instance a lot of my charries are traveling with @freedomwriter rn
@esther-c heeeey u on? Ik ur not getting the Notifs right lol
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KattheWriter replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
(Is it way too late to throw one of mine in??)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 😭 aww boys…it’s alright…. Ara’s protective of him…but seeing you guys like this, she’ll forgive you…I know it.
Arabella
Dietrich and Adolphus‘ eyes went wide, faces paling as all eyes turned to them. They forced their heads down as Frida glared.
“Boys,” she practically spat. “What is wrong with you two?”
“N-Nothing [Read more]
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