Abigail.M.

@liberty

I enjoyed the ending as well…though not at first! 😂

Yeah, I knew that was probably going to be most reader’s reactions. I actually let one of my non-kp friends read it and I think it majorly confused her. XD

I love your descriptions and adjectives! Some examples: smogish, hard nailed, smutted.

Thanks!

I am curious, though. How did Timon a…

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@whalekeeper

Aye! You have my vote!

@liberty

Here it is either way.

Cobblestones

The boy glanced warily about another smogish street before making his way across. Maribel would be here any minute now, and he needed to be here to see her safely home. That was his side of the agreement. She was always on time, always happy to share a bite of gingerbread and a laugh. His friend.

A…[Read more]

@liberty

I have a story to submit, but it’s sort of…shifted a bit, so it doesn’t fit with the theme much anymore. Do you still want it?

@raxforge @loopylin

Syph

This hall was getting rather full of too tall people, but this place was probably full of such halls. He sighed. Best to find his way while there was someone of the Big hight on hand to see where they were going.

“Nay, my friend. I must decline your kind offer, although I certainly do appreciate your generosity. There…[Read more]

tag didn’t work XD I did it wrong…. @freed_and_redeemed

@freed-and-redeemed I FINALLY GET TO RESPONDDD!!

While im not totally pleased that the others are on the back burner I know its k cuz they’re you’re babies so you’ll get back to it (; just like me with my WIP!

BUT I HAD TO SAY…THAT MY WRITER WHO WRITES THESE AWESOME CHARACTERS THAT ARE NOW MY BABIES CUZ I HAVE STOLEN THEM XD IS GOING TO…[Read more]

@liberty

That gives me time. =) I sort of forgot too, but the story is nearly finished anyway.

@loopylin @raxforge

Sypher

He followed the two girls, happy to have found someone that didn’t tower over him. Not that he was short. Some of these students were simply far overgrown.

Which made walking in their midst highly uncomfortable. Syph sidestepped a blundering youth, sending him a scalding glare as he slipped away.

The hallway was…[Read more]

@loopylin

Ah, that would explain it a bit.

@loopylin

Okay, the Starlight song, what is the story behind those lyrics? Because those last few lines seemed to get really specific…

@grcr

If you did a comic, I’d pay to read it.

*snort*

@whalekeeper

XD

All people are weird in their own way, some more dramatically than others. It’s the “normal” ones that usually scare me.

@ellette-giselle

Because we’re right there with you. XD

But aren’t we all a little crazy? I mean, that’s at least what writers joke about…

@whalekeeper

*realizes this is several pages back*

*shrugs*

Yes, I think it had to do with the helmet and nearly indestructible armor thing? Along with the galactic justice finder (although Leo is kinda on the other side of things if I’m not mistaken, but I haven’t actually seen The Mandalorian).

@ellette-giselle

Why thank you. I do try to…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

*GASPETH*

YES I want to see aesthetics!? I would totally read this book, or books, or whatever. It sounds absolutely lovely.

*deep breath*

*marginally calms down*

How long have you been working on it/has it been a thing? Even a vague figment of a dream?

@ellette-giselle

I am really enjoying the world building. Keep it up!

@ellette-giselle

Oops, sorry. I was waiting for class to start and in a hurry, so I wasn’t thinking through my writing.

What I meant was, do your characters need to make the right choice? Or should they mess up a couple times, possibly showing that God can work through even our mistakes, and working on character flaws. Although, you did already…[Read more]