Abigail.M.

@whalekeeper

Lyn: I have my own room in The Main Tent, which is where perform our shows and have our big practice! It’s also where my Uncle stays! Nyx stays with me of course. It’s filled with hammocks and tapestries and pillows and everything and it has a makeshift galaxy on the ceiling that was made for me. It’s sorta…triangular shaped…[Read more]

@whalekeeper Love this cuz Pax doesn’t have a baby book so he would have just been like “OH OK!” XD Also I went back and reread Seb’s thing with pax. They didn’t have too much interaction, but last thing that happened was he helped save him from his Brothers sooo they’d probably be on OK terms. But He’d probably scare him a bit despite them being…[Read more]

I hope all that was clear lol

@koshka

You’re fine!

Ahh that makes sense!

Beyonders is a middle-grade fantasy trilogy, and it’s quite well-done, but not written from a particularly Christian perspective, (I think the author is Mormon? but it doesn’t greatly affect the story, but a certain character that only appears for a brief time is similar to the oracle of Delphi)

The…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Lyn: Actually-!

Nyx: Don’t you dare…

Lyn: He has worn socks before! And booties…SO CUTE! And hats. He’s the cutest little thing around!!!

Nyx: OH MY GOSH WOMAN STOP IT! 

And yea, his collars range from average with a small bell or crystal or something and designs to immaculate

@whalekeeper aww Marcel! Also imma have to go find and reread the seb one XD @rae @esther-c

Paxton 

Paxton nodded quickly, thrilled to be able to help his friend. He swiftly moved toward the backpack and gently reached down, careful not to toss anything around as he lifted the yellow covered book.

“M-M-other s-said I could…c-could c-come…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Jocelyn: BAHAHAHAHA

Nyx: *Growls* NEVER! I WOULD NEVER WEAR A COSTUME! YOU COULDN’T MAKE ME!

Jocelyn: Well…there was that one time…

Nyx: *Screeches and jumps on her* WE PROMISED NEVER TO SPEAK OF THAT AGAINNNN!!!!

No, but he has worn EXTREMELY fancy “collars”

(I use quotations because uhh…don’t call them collars…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @rae @esther-c

Paxton

Paxton’s eyes widened at the sound of his name and he froze, watching eyes turn to Marcel and then him. He cowered for a moment, feeling the stares before glancing at his pink-haired friend.

The boy, though no doubt exhausted and wounded, had a small smile on his face, eyes bright as he looked at the…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Jocelyn: *Happens to be wearing one of said outfits. Flounces around in it.* These are just the kind of outfits everyone wears in Cirque! We have a master seamster who puts together each and every outfit with careful precision and speed!

Nyx: Lyn’s outfits get special attention though

Lyn: *Giggles and grins like a cat*

For…[Read more]

Writing from Pax’s POV is so fun sometimes because he has that childlike point of view and innocency but its so skewed at the same time, so you get to write it like a child, with not quite finished sentences, or exclamations that wouldn’t work for an adult, but at the same time it’s not all quite as innocent as it should be.

@whalekeeper @rae @anyone-else

Paxton

Paxton hid slightly behind Lukas as the conversations rose and dipped. He dipped his chin slightly, hiding into Lukas’ shoulder as he looked on worriedly at his pink-haired friend and eyed the newcomers warily.

He felt a little sad that his friends hadn’t seemed to notice him…or at least that he’d been…[Read more]

@rae @whalekeeper @esther-c @anyoneelse AAAAGH SO SORRY I’VE BEEN GONEEEE

Pax has just been standing there basically taking it all in lol…

Could uh someone catch me up just a bit on what’s happening in the dorm?

@scoutfinch180

I suppose I refer to death, eternal life, ect. in the trilogy more than actually happens. My characters get in some tight circumstances (like pretty much every other character out there).

There are only two deaths which actually happen to important characters (no MCs die in this series, although one is getting pretty close to it.…[Read more]

@esther-c sorry it’s been so long since my RP! I never saw yours so kept waiting XD

Paxton

Paxton looked on a bit confused at the exchange between the two boys but also curious. He giggled a bit as Lukas stepped toward him, ears still tinted pink, sighing in exasperation.

He blushed a bit more at Paxton’s giggle, giving him an incredulous look.…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

@every-one else who commented on here gave such good advice as I’ve struggled with this myself!

I don’t know if it helps but in one WIP I had to set aside for the time being (it was too complex, needed to take a step back to reorganize later), my God-figure was included like you demonstrate, but was treated more as an enigma or…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

You have some good responses already, which I shall have to think over. Nonetheless…

[Disclaimers: 1) While I am not writing “kid’s stories” I am writing Middle-grade, which is definitely not YA. 2) I am not writing to unbelievers, but rather young people still building their foundations. 3) One major theme in my current series…[Read more]

@esther-c

Paxton

Paxton’s eyes widened as he spotted Lukas and Fynn called him over to join them as they headed to the dorms.

“Paxton!” Lukas beamed as he spotted the smaller boy, a hand reaching out to take his free one. “You’re back! Oh man, I thought we’d never see you again! How…?”

Paxton smiled, a small, excited giggle escaping as Luk…[Read more]

@esther-c sorry if this is a stupid question lol! May have missed it, when did Lukas join?

@whalekeeper (I almost put @marcel 🤦🏻‍♀️ ROFL)

I like that about Luna, where it’s subcontext and stuff! Makes sense!!

@jonas, yea that’s good advice! Thx!

@esther-c yea it can be difficult, and if I figure some stuff out as I write I’ll totally try to share 😊

@everyone @princesachronicle22 so don’t know who else is RPing in ur group but mind if I put November in and he runs into ur group?