Abigail.M.

Leo

This crawlspace may not have been the smallest thing he’d squeezed into, but it was clearly trying. He slid a little farther on his back, boots scuffing over the damp the floor. He shifted a bit to try and ease a cramp in his soaked back.

And there it was, showing ghostly white in the light of his head lamp. A broken pipe.

He closed his…[Read more]

And that was way longer than I anticipated in the document. *Sigh*

Okay, these two are from a recent WIP my sister and I started. It’s sci-fish which is definitely not my typical, but has been fun to play with.

Leo Boltman (Leoron Benneck)

He’s just been hired at the school as a maintenance repairman and electrician. He’s hoping to find a good school for his sister and sort-of-adopted little brother, where the…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

*Sniffle*

I think I love Erich now.

Do y’all mind if I jump back into this RP? I’d be bringing in a character from a newish WIP (not the original set I had way back in the beginning of the school).

@whalekeeper

Oooof, those are such a pain. I think I basically starved myself for a day and a half after one set.

(seriously considering sticking a couple charies in as I’m not in any other RPs)

@whalekeeper

Oouch. Wisdom teeth?

@freed_and_redeemed

*Just now getting around to responding to your Riker scene*

There’s hope! He’s finally seeing a bit of real light, even if it’s just a spark. Poor guy still needs tea and cookies. And maybe a Bible study.

Thank you so much for sharing! I loved reading through that scene.

@rae

I’ve never heard of that site, or really any site for cover making. Guess I haven’t been looking. XD

I’ve used Photoshop or Canva to design working covers before, and I’ve been satisfied enough with that (especially Photoshop, but I just like playing with that thing).

If you want tips for making a good cover design, I’d say start by…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Glad it was helpful! (Am more than mildly curious who this character will be)

Gracious, I don’t like this guy. Or Riker’s father much either. They’re…slimy. *stalks out of room*

@freed_and_redeemed

Hmm… stubborn characters can be troublesome.

Here are me thoughts. Use such as are helpful, discard such as aren’t.

• He already can’t live with his guilt/shame/hopelessness. That is quite obvious. He just needs to realize what is already clear to everyone else including the reader.
• Due to the very fact that he hasn’t…

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@freed_and_redeemed

Thank you so much for the update, the poor dears. They need some help. And maybe some tea and cookies.

So…I have some feedback for Riker’s scene. I am supposing this is nearing the crisis point of the second book, as Riker is getting a broken record sensation with his guilt. Otherwise…ooof. That was a hard scene.

Also, I…[Read more]

If someone ever makes their tag line something like @everyone-else or @anyone-who-reads-this I already pity them.

@elishavet-pidyon

They got us alright.

(Also, @AllOtherKeepers Hi y’all! I’m haven’t croaked yet, praise the Lord.)

My Foolish Heart

I come to You and weep

Holding every shattered fragment

Of the heart I was to keep

But foolishly let someone take it. 

They seemed to care

And told me they’d stay

But when I needed them there

They swiftly ran away.

Is loving someone worth it?

Will it ever end without pain?

Will I someday see the summit?

Is it worth th…[Read more]

That’s beautiful @livingwoodchronicles

@mineralizedwritings

What?! Oops…no Artham doesn’t die. (It did sound like that, now looking back at my wording XD)

No, I was referring to Pete’s anguish when he realizes his little brother is still alive (although fading fast and is not responding to the… telepathy thing).

@theducktator

Thanks for letting me know! Looking into it now.

@freed_and_redeemed

Hmm, that is a bit of a pickle.

Perhaps he was originally just afraid of (and a little bit for) Adinah. He didn’t hate them at first (that’s not something that happens overnight). He kept the boyd because, at the root, he did at first still love Adinah (and them) and vaguely wanted to keep them safe.

Also, he doesn’t have to…[Read more]