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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 hour, 7 minutes ago
Ah, me too. If anything RPs can at least give poor, mistreated characters a chance at a happy life.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 hour, 38 minutes ago
Leo
“Of course I have. I’m an engineer, top of my class. It was the most fun I’ve had in… Well, there’s not much like it. So much energy. Such precise, perfect lines.”
He grinned, picking up a bolt. It was a hex bolt, smooth and surprisingly new. Close to the size he used on the Mantis. He rolled it between his fingers.
“I…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 hour, 54 minutes ago
Leo
“Aye, you got it. Nearly everything built out of wood uses nails or screws. Metal stuff like big buildings use heaver screws, welding, bolts, all sorts of things.” He leaned back on his heels eyes going distant. He rolled a bolt on the palm of his hand. “Back home we used a lot more Laser welding, but screws and bolts are…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 hours, 9 minutes ago
Or…Leo didn’t have emotional breakdowns as much as serious temper problems and protective issues. Silvia had a lot more breakdowns because she couldn’t understand what was going on (she’s about 5 years younger than Leo).
Leo
“Sure.” He dropped to one knee by the bucket. “This,” he picked up a screw “is a screw. A Philips head…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 hours, 30 minutes ago
I get it. XD
I wonder how Leo and Rory would have gotten along when Leo was a torn up 13 year old. Or even 16 year old at the beginning of his own book. It’s been great fun to write him as a fully developed character.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 hours, 35 minutes ago
Leo
He frowned. Something was…off. He sat back against the edge of the table, eyebrows quirking and lips pinched.
Rory was tense. Too tense. Kinda like a rubber band pulled tight or a soldier at attention.
Oh. Leo could have smacked himself. Instead he sighed and let a small, serious smile slip into place.
“Rory, I’m not…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 hours, 1 minute ago
Same room we were in back before the gray and run for Quincy, technically yesterday.
Leo
He let the door fall closed behind them and headed for the box piled wall.
“Make yourself comfortable on the couch there I’ll find that bucket somewhere.” Where had he put it? A few minutes search in the tool boxes came up with nothing. He…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 hours, 22 minutes ago
Leo
“Aye. We’re headed down. or rather…” The elevator came to a clicking stop. The door swish clicked open. “Looks like we’re down already. Come on.”
He stepped out into the dimly lit basement. Machines whirred and whined, muffling the ring of their boots against the concrete as he led the way around and through. Oil and cold…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 hours, 49 minutes ago
Oh gracious. Yes. XD
In Leo’s defense, if was a comparison someone else made, and mostly depended on the “galavanting around administering interplanetary justice”, although Leo is more trying to outrun said justice too so…
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 15 hours, 52 minutes ago
Leo
Level 0. This place had a funny floor plan. He punched the button and leaned back against the wall as the elevator began its decent.
Rory was giving him a weird, confused look. What had he said? Done? Leo lifted an eyebrow. “Yes? What is it?”
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 19 hours, 24 minutes ago
Oops. Poor Eddie. At least this kid does actually like to dance.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 20 hours, 11 minutes ago
Sprite kid don’t get it. XD
Sypher
He followed the lasses in, settling into the seat be across from them.
“Eddie. Ellie. Ah.” He blinked at her in concentration. Grinned. “I am named Sypher, but everyone who doesn’t call me that, calls me Syph. As for dancing, or rather…I don’t believe I understand. What days are open”
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 20 hours, 42 minutes ago
Leo
He grinned. “First off you’re going to sit on that couch in the basement break room and sort a bucket of bolts and screws that I accidentally dumped together last week. Or maybe that was two weeks ago.” He paused to blink up at the ceiling for a moment, then refocused on Rory. “Anyway, you’ll do that while I check the work…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days ago
The pocket thing. XD
Leo
The lorry rolled to a squealing stop. It’s doors swooshed open. Time to move.
Leo braced against the back of the seat in front of him as he helped Rory to his feet. Then they shuffled down the aisle with Silvia and Quincy close behind. The steps squeaked under their feet.
Students filled the sidewalk…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days ago
*Gasp of joy*
He’s perfectly amazing. I love the goggles. They may now end up in his character design. And the tools. Yes. XD
Kinda want to change my profile pic now…
*Suddenly realizes I’ve never done an aesthetic for Leo. Or his book*
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 1 hour ago
I enjoyed the ending as well…though not at first! 😂
Yeah, I knew that was probably going to be most reader’s reactions. I actually let one of my non-kp friends read it and I think it majorly confused her. XD
I love your descriptions and adjectives! Some examples: smogish, hard nailed, smutted.
Thanks!
I am curious, though. How did Timon a…
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Koshka replied to the topic Topic of the Week…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 22 hours ago
Aye! You have my vote!
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 15 hours ago
Here it is either way.
Cobblestones
The boy glanced warily about another smogish street before making his way across. Maribel would be here any minute now, and he needed to be here to see her safely home. That was his side of the agreement. She was always on time, always happy to share a bite of gingerbread and a laugh. His friend.
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 15 hours ago
I have a story to submit, but it’s sort of…shifted a bit, so it doesn’t fit with the theme much anymore. Do you still want it?
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week ago
Syph
This hall was getting rather full of too tall people, but this place was probably full of such halls. He sighed. Best to find his way while there was someone of the Big hight on hand to see where they were going.
“Nay, my friend. I must decline your kind offer, although I certainly do appreciate your generosity. There…[Read more]
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