AveryTheExplodey

So… now what?

@esther-c

Aww…Lukas has a crush! <333 (so does Liv…lol)

Livia 

“Are you sure? You can tell me anything,” Liv smiled back.

(Sorry I didn’t know what else to have her say, lol)

@rae

Sef

She didn’t know where she was. All she knew was that she wanted to leave.

All around her people were dancing in pairs.

“Excuse me, miss,” a woman…[Read more]

Though that’s not “smashing” the record, do we think we can do better?

Yeah, we did it by one person!

I’m here….I’ve been excited all day XD

@rae

Ummm…OF COURSE!!! I THOUGHT YOU’D NEVER ASK!!! lol

Should I have her randomly appear in the dance class and be paired with Chase since he’s not dancing with anyone?

@esther-c

I know Abbie Emmons on YouTube loves the three act story structure, so if you want to explore that a little more, I suggest checking out her videos. Especially the one just about the inciting incident. I think she does a pretty good job of explaining it. 😉

I will check it out!! I need all the help I can get…. XD

@freedomwriter76

Girlllll I love your writing so much!! (it almost always makes me tear up but I love it!!!!!)

Does it seem boring?

NOOOO! Definitely not! I was so into it, and I could see everything in my mind!How is the pace?

Can you already begin to see the MC’s struggles/arcs?

A little, I can tell that Riker struggles with guilt and L…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Tysm for your help and encouragement!! Every single time someone tells me something they loved about my story it makes me smile 🙂

At the end. I don’t think pregnancy is enough to make somebody have that many issues unless she was also sick, and the buildup made me think her sickness was going to tie into the greater story i…

[Read more]

Half an hour!

@trailblazer

I love it sooooooo much!!! LIBBIE HURRY UP AND SAY YOU’LL MARRY HIM!!!! AHHHH!! lol!

#LALBERT

@acancello

Oh my goodness!!!!! I am so happy for you, and so proud of you! I am so lucky to get to know you as a friend on here, and I’m celebrating right with you, girl!! You have to let me know how editing/publishing goes!!!

Well, Pitts are explained later in the book, same with Rippak and Godede Waters. I didn’t want to explain everything…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @smiley @esther-c @rae @hybridlore @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @acancello @mineralizedwritings @vinagirl

Okay, I really have been working on this chapter a bunch, and I would like to know you’re guys’ thoughts! I know some of you guys have read this chapter, but I was wondering if you had any…[Read more]

@acancello

I would be such an emotional wreck 😭😭😭 LIKE FINISHING A NOVEL!!! THAT IS SO AMAZING!!

@esther-c

Girl I love Ami and Ev!!! I love Ev’s personality, I wish I had a friend like him XD

1. Were you drawn into the story right away?

I kind of agree with Min, it seemed really abrupt, and I was a little confused at first. But the action also made me want to see what happened next, so it drew me in, but only because I was confused and…[Read more]

@ACANCELLO

OH MY GOSH GIRLLLLLLL!!!! I AM SO HAPPY FOR YOU!!! I LITERALLY FREAKED OUT WHEN I READ THAT YOU’RE FINISHING THE EPILOGUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHH!!! <333

@esther-c

Idk…I just feel like that way has much better writing and is just more emotional XD

if I’m being completely honest here… sometimes hooks are overrated…. 👀😂

lol!

@trailblazer

Aww that was so sweet I love it!!

@jonas

Ahhh man, I was excited to wake up at 4 in the morning😂

@grcr

I’ve literally been so excited all week XXD sometimes I’ll see it and think I missed it, and freak out, then be like, oh wait, we still have a day left lol