AveryTheExplodey

@freed_and_redeemed

WHAT

GIRL

Your writing is so good!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHH!

Love this movement, protect Adolin! I’m on the final stretch of Rhythm, and I’m not worried about it, but you really never know with Sanderson, he’s really good at things like that. He’s killed favorite characters before, but it’s generally still fulfilling when he does, like with LightSong.

@theshadow

It doesn’t make sense really, after all these people are the ones facing hardships daily, wouldn’t it make the most sense to turn on whatever religion and god they believe in?

Very true, this is something we see repeatedly. Those who go through the worst in life often end up being the most drawn towards God. Part of it is because the…[Read more]

@theshadow

Why not just let us live in communion with Him in ignorance? I’m probably 100% wrong about this, but I think living in ignorance would be better than many actively rejecting God and being separated from Him.

I’ll give my best classical response, then my personally preferred answer.

Essentially as you’ve already said, there is victory a…[Read more]

@esther-c @rae @ellette-giselle

OMCCCC

I’m so sorryyyy I totally forgot about this!

Ahhh

Ruth, you can totally RP first!!

@the_lost_journal

Hiiiii!

So basically you just compile a bunch of photos and quotes that describe your character. Everyone does it differently and there’s no right or wrong way to do it!

I’d suggest creating a Canva account (go to canva.com and sign up, it’s free!) and you can do really cool things with Canva, though there are other platforms…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Being forced to be active on KP and make progress on my writing? I can’t tell if I should be mad or grateful, lol!

@grcr

Awww girlyyy I’m sorryyy <3 I care about you so much and if you ever need to talk to someone I’m here for you <3

I’ll be praying!

Okay hahahaha

I’m just playing around with things at the moment, I’ll let you know what I decide!

@esther-c

Honestly…

I have an idea….

ignore that first chapter lol

I HAVE A PLAN *maniacal laughter*

WHY DO I CHANGE IT SO MUCHHHH lol

@esther-c

I don’t know how a four year old thinks hahaha

honestly I had really deep thoughts for a little kid and I have always thought really complex, so it seems realistic to me XDXD

I will work on it!!!

@anyone-who-is-interested

Chapter 1

Strong hands grabbed at her shoulders, trying to rip her away.

But Sef wouldn’t let go.

Eyes scrunched shut, tears leaking from the corners, she clung to her father like he was the only thing keeping her life together.

In a way, he was.

And now he was leaving.

“Let go, Sef,” her mother said stern…

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@rae

Wow that’s crazyyyy

It doesn’t matter to me honestly!

@rae

Um…WHAT

@esther-c

yes that would be funnn!

@rae @esther-c

I really miss this RP…is it still going??? And is there any way that I can bring Sef and Liv back…? 👀👀👀

@trailblazer

That is so cool!!!! That sounds amazing!!!!!

@loopylin

Thank you so much <333

Yesssss! I ate too much food lol

@jonas

Oh okay!

That’s not the reason anymore I guess 😂 I actually forgot I said that…a lot has changed lol

That makes sense though, I understand what you’re saying!

Oh, and as for why I changed the ending instead of them abandoning Lilitu…

There are a couple reasons why I did that. Maybe they’re not good reasons lol but I’m going to leave it, at least for now so I can play with it. I think it will make the story make a little bit more sense  in the future so I’m just going to leave it for now.

@hybridlore

Thank youuu!

@highscribe

I think this is really good! You have some really nice prose.

Thank you so much!

I corrected the things you suggested and you’re right, I think it will flow a lot better! Thank you so much, you have been very helpful! <3