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@hybridlore @theshadow

Thank you for sharing that experience Hybrid, though I haven’t necessarily dealt with these same trials, I do know pain and doubt. I don’t want to force myself into this conversation, but I just wanted to say that God is aware of you both, and He wants to end your suffering, but there is a plan in all things. Anxiety is…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

YAYYYYY

I love it when you give me critiques because you literally always help me, whether telling me things I need to change or what I’m doing well, no matter what it is it always builds me up in the end, I appreciate you so much girl <3

@ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @theducktator @whalekeeper @rae @anyone-else

Here’s another unedited scene…

This is like the third chapter I think:

Lilitu, in fact, was not dead.

Though at the moment, he wished he were.

And if he couldn’t bring himself to get off the ground and keep running for his life, he would be.

His f…

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@theducktator

AHHHHHH I knowwww!!!!

Aw yeah :/ she just needs a hug 🥺🥺🥺🥺

@theshadow

It was so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@keilah-h

Sammmmeeee!!!!

And thank you so much!!!!

I agree with you so much on that hahaha! Like “I’m sorrry this is probably so cringe but I love it!!!”

@ESTHER-C
YAYYYYYY

@anyone-else-also-joining

I CAN’T WAIT I SIGNED UP!!!!!!!!!!!

@theducktator

I’ve looked into joining it before….Idk if you’ve seen this website or not but if not here you go:

https://theyoungwriter.com/crazy-writing-week

It explains a little bit more!!!!

I’m going to do it this year!!! Idk if its my impulsive adhd kicking in or what but yeahhhh hahahaha

anyone wanna try it for the first time with me??…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

I agree…it did get a little info dumpy lol

Again it isn’t edited…and the details about Andromeda are mostly in the prologue and will be revealed little by little in later chapters (if everything stays according to plan hahaha!)

@keilah-h

I know…me too…I feel like when I started it when she was little, it felt…[Read more]

I don’t know how many snowballs I even have…but here’s 161 words:

She didn’t want to wake up.

Closing her eyes, turning her face into her pillow and pulling the blanket over her head, she desperately wanted this to be a dream, wanted to go back to sleep and pretend nothing was wrong.

But Aubrielle persisted, the worry and unease in her voice c…

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@ellette-giselle @grcr

Okay thank you guys!!! <33

OH and I need some chapter title ideas for this section as well!

@esther-c

(tagging some other peoples too) @ellette-giselle @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else

Okay….

I have come to a decision lol

I’m keeping the prologue the same, but I’m tweaking a few things with the beginning.

Here’s the new first chapter (it opens when Sef is sixteen years old) Don’t worry, I’m going to edit it and…[Read more]

@theducktator

Oh I forgot I posted that lol

you’re fine!

@theshadow

oh my goodness

girl

that was literally amazing

I’m like speechless

@esther-c

I have no idea lol

ummmmmm where was the last time we RP’d???

@theshadow

Well, people who choose to live apart from God on earth are kind of living a personal hell, right?

Right, it’s self-inflicted. It’s choosing to be something lesser than you could be, which leads to sorrow.

How can someone get to the point where having the ultimate good would be worse for them than hell?

Because of who they chose to be.…[Read more]

@theshadow

That is true, he did have that point in between after the betrayal and before his death to repent. I guess we’ll never really know for sure why God allows us to go to hell. After all, as Judith said in her book, not even humans can a know for sure what is on other humans hearts, let alone the God of the Universes’ mind. Maybe people tha…

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*saves snowballs*

Throws two at @esther-c and @whaley

To everyone who threw snow at me:

I haven’t been on here in a hot second, sorry everyone!!!! Ahhh….

I actually did a TON of editing today, and I’m so obsessed with my writing!

I’m not going to post the part I worked on on KP, just because I feel like it could be too dark for some people (Idk though…) I promise it’s not super dark, but a…[Read more]