AveryTheExplodey

Also, I just saw what you said to Linus about Liam not being a Christian. Then how does Sabina’s statement make sense?

Sabina smiled through tears. “He is happy now. Much happier and safer than I could have ever made him, and much more loved than I could have ever loved him.”

Also, I don’t know if an orphan who hasn’t had a family for a long time…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Good section! I was going to say, it seems weird that Beric would change so quickly, but now I see he’s still going to struggle.

@grcr

YESSSSS!!!

Okay sounds good!!!!! Are you still writing your story? you should resend me the link, I’ve always loved your story! <3

OH! Ellette, you’re gonna be so happy… ( @theducktator and @grcr might also want to know this)

I have a recent development…

Cass is no longer going to be playing with Sef’s feelings.

He’s officially a nice guy again hahaha

Since Lilitu and Sef are separated for a good chunk of the book, there’s no opportunity for this to happen. Cass is…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @anyone-else

Next chapter!!!

What am I doing?

Frustration built up in Lilitu’s chest until he wanted to scream.

But he couldn’t scream….or else Adar would find him.

Cass isn’t going to come bail you out this time, he pressed his lips together in a thin line. You have to figure it out yourself.

He tried to find a comfort…

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@ellette-giselle

I will!!!

@ellette-giselle

Okay great!!! hahaha!

Really??? That makes me really happy!!!! Thank you!!!! <3

Speaking of Eloy, I just wrote a funny Eloy scene (it’s kind of cheesy I think, but I’m going to edit it later.) I’ll post it in a little bit!!!

@ellette-giselle @jonas (let me know if I’m tagging you too much, I know you’re probably busy!!!!) this goes for anyone else too, please let me know if you’d like me to stop tagging you lol @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else

Here’s a second half of the Lilitu chapter:

(Again, this is unedited so this won’t be the finished product, this is…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

First of all, I don’t know if you had planned for Lilitu to have any more lasting injuries than some cuts and bruises, but from the level of beating he’s just received, he’s likely to have some cracked or broken ribs (which could damage internal organs), and/or a concussion. And if he was knocked out/unconscious for long…

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Merry Christmas everyone!!

@keilah-h @loopylin Awesome!

@theshadow

You’re welcome! Cool, so am I. That’s what I figured, but I wasn’t sure.

Merry Christmas!!

@keilah-h

I agree!!!

WHATTTTT

twenty seven!!!!

that’s crazy!

@keilah-h

The beginning has changed SO. MUCH.

The storyline/plot is pretty similar, but it’s definitely different…

@thearcaneaxiom

Thank you. I really like that answer… it’s so true and the way he worded it is beautiful also.

Merry Christmas to you too!

@hybridlore @theshadow

Thank you for sharing that experience Hybrid, though I haven’t necessarily dealt with these same trials, I do know pain and doubt. I don’t want to force myself into this conversation, but I just wanted to say that God is aware of you both, and He wants to end your suffering, but there is a plan in all things. Anxiety is…[Read more]

@theshadow

Do you mind me asking if you are a boy or a girl? (Not to offend you or anything—I just couldn’t tell by your profile pic.)

@theshadow

I’m so glad I could help you by sharing. I know how hard it is to be in a constant war with your thoughts, and I’m sorry that you have to go through it. Your battle sounds a lot like mine, and I just want to say that, even though during the months it was happening it was one of the worst times of my life, I have grown a lot closer to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

YAYYYYY

I love it when you give me critiques because you literally always help me, whether telling me things I need to change or what I’m doing well, no matter what it is it always builds me up in the end, I appreciate you so much girl <3

@ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @theducktator @whalekeeper @rae @anyone-else

Here’s another unedited scene…

This is like the third chapter I think:

Lilitu, in fact, was not dead.

Though at the moment, he wished he were.

And if he couldn’t bring himself to get off the ground and keep running for his life, he would be.

His f…

[Read more]

@theducktator

AHHHHHH I knowwww!!!!

Aw yeah :/ she just needs a hug 🥺🥺🥺🥺