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@savannah_grace2009

I like this chapter as well! So for some reason I thought that the Andromedans were not aware of Earth, but if they are, and even know some random facts about it’s current modern day, including some sayings, then Fit as a Fiddle could become a common saying there.

@freedomwriter76

I know! They should get an award or something XD

@savannah_grace2009

lol! Your the one that told me to do it, so…

It’s still up to you though😂

@thearcaneaxiom

I want to listen…but i’m kinda scared XD

@thearcaneaxiom @jonas

Here’s chapter 2, if you can’t read it today, that’s fine.

Chapter 2: Euphoria

Sef’s hands flew to her mouth to stifle a scream.

She wanted to sing, scream, cry, dance for joy.

Her mother was not sick. And she was going to have a little brother or sister!

“Really?” Sef squeaked, smiling so hard her cheeks ached, and t…[Read more]

@jonas

It’s fun, because you can also use the same flavor of voice to do Wall-E and Stitch.

@euodia-vision

Yeah, he even knows that whole scene by heart, I had to read it😂

I debated ChatGPT, telling it to start as an Atheist, and instead of convincing it, I just backed it into a corner of Moral Relativistic Atheism, lol! What’s interesting about Moral Relativists is that they are next to impossible to debate, because they’ve accepted the idea that morality has no grounding, and therefore people like Hitler are just…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

Yep, that’s me! Thanks🤣🤣🤣

@savannah_grace2009 @euodia-vision @jonas @rae

Do it lol

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h ttps://www.mote.com/m/darsdx5 (delete the space after the h)

Let me know if it doesn’t work.

@savannah_grace2009

Should I post the next one later today, or wait until tomorrow?

I’m good with whatever you decide!

@savannah_grace2009

I agree with Jonas, this is a really great start! It’s a much more hopeful beginning too, while there may be uncertainty. I don’t have much to say either, other than the fact that “fit as a fiddle” is an English idiom, and would be very unlikely to be seen elsewhere, but that can very easily be fixed or even ignored. You can…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

But again, I don’t think it’s graphic at all, so you’re good. <3

Okay, that helps me a lot! Thank you! I get really paranoid when I’m writing, XD

And thanks for sharing! The last one was SO SAD!!!! *cries*

That makes sense, thanks so much for helping me!

@jonas

Should I post the next one later today, or wait until tomorrow?

@jonas

four appearing at once would be panic inducing, lol.

Inserts “panik” meme

lol

@jonas

Thanks! I was actually really happy with this scene, I think it’s one of my best.

Yes, it would be Sef and Lilitu’s book. I have four chapters of that one so far, but I didn’t want to spam you guys, lol.

Yeah, I was planning to do either Neveah or Ottoline for the “teaser”, though Neveah’s would make more sense.

@highscribeofaetherium

(Hey, Vethe. If you’re in so sure there are only twelve planets then WHAT PLANET ARE YOU ON? lol)

Guess she didn’t think of that one lol XD

@thearcaneaxiom

Do it lol

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @anyone-else

So here’s the first chapter of my revisions to the Andromeda book…ready for critiquing!

Chapter 1: New Beginnings

Newborn light sifted between the windows, piercing the darkness.

Through the smudged glass, Sef could see the Andromedan sunrise, she could see the indigo trees dancing as the wind pushed them…[Read more]

@power

I like it! very intriguing!