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@highscribeofaetherium @jonas @rae @beth-torres

GUYS???? ARE YOU KIDDING ME?????????????

WE TALKED ABOUT THIS!!!!!

THE ONE DAY I’M GONE, YOU ADD 12 NEW PAGES??? WHAT THE HECK?? 😑😑😑

@rae @esther-c

Livia

“Xandro!” she chided her horse as he yanked the hood off Chase’s head. Xandro looked very pleased with himself, holding his head up high. He snorted and played with the empty hood.

@jonas

That works. I like 9, it has fun properties. 12 does to of course😆

@kathleenramm

Yeah, it’s been down for a while, and the formatting is being a little weird again.

@jonas

Cool! So you were able to make it so that the calendar could mesh with earth time just enough so that you could fit your birthday into it as a significant day. It also makes sense that the months follow the Eivir.

@rae

Wond makes an approximate rotation of 357 Earthling days, but I’ve not decided if it’s off that number by a day or just a couple hours. Notice my use of the word Earthling, for I haven’t even totally decided if a Wondian day is different than ours (most likely is). I’ve only been working on the origin planet of Wond for about a year, so it i…

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@hybridlore

Yeah, I missed your conversation with @jonas until now, but if I’m understanding you correctly, your wanting to power spaceships with sound. Sound as a force has been used to manipulate objects in precise ways, but they would have to be ridiculously light, and the cases where we have done such a thing, it’s an object surrounded by…[Read more]

@rae

This sounds fun, I’m in. It might help me churn out some actual writing for once😂

@rae

Also, who are the Nameless Things. That title is already used by Tolkien to describe the indescribable creatures at the very bottom of Arda. Are you describing something similar?

@rae

That’s really cool! So does the Wondian planet make a perfect 357 day rotation around it’s sun? We have leap year on Earth to account for the slight error in the 365 days. So is the planet simply perfectly placed for simplicity, or is there some analogue of leap year. Also, what about seasons? Are there four standard seasons like Earth, or…[Read more]

@jonas

Sorry, I’ve been inactive all week.

Personally, I think that a character that won’t be well understood inside or outside may still be an interesting main character to see the prospective of. Despite not being able to understand the character’s motives, as the character doesn’t understand them himself, that can still be a relatable…[Read more]

@rae

This looks fun!

@calyhuge

Livia must be crushing hard to give that thorough of an apology for such a small slight. Just some casual observer commentary. *chuckles to self*

Actually no XD She just feels bad lol

@rae

Livia

This is all my fault. She frowned. How could she make him see that he really hadn’t messed up?

“You don’t have to talk to me if you don…[Read more]

@calyhuge

Livia must be crushing hard to give that thorough of an apology for such a small slight. Just some casual observer commentary. *chuckles to self*

Actually no XD She just feels bad lol

Livia

This is all my fault. She frowned. How could she make him see that he really hadn’t messed up?

“You don’t have to talk to me if you don’t want to,…[Read more]

@anyone

I just love the song Broken is Beautiful by The Young Escape. It reminds me so much of Sef (one of my characters)!

@rae

HighScribe just said “si lo fue” which is spanish for “Yes, it was”.

(I do not know spanish, I just looked it up XD)

@rae

Livia

She noticed Chase acting strange, and she started to feel guilty. She hadn’t meant to hurt his feelings, she wasn’t even annoyed. She had been only joking, but now she felt horrible.

“Hey, Chase?” she walked closer to him. “I’m sorry, about how I reacted. I was kind of exagerating, and I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings. It’s just-“…[Read more]

btw, sorry if this is confusing, but YWW and Y-dubs are the same thing, just some people call them different things. I posted the link a few posts earlier.

@beth-torres

Well, it’s basically like KP, but different. (that was literally the worst way to explain it, XD)

It does cost money, but I’ve heard great things about it.

Here’s a link:

https://theyoungwriter.com/workshop-students

Oh, I should probably tag people if I want people to reply…XD

*facepalms*

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