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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Any member of the Diffi Cult found guilty of taking the easier and/or more straightforward path is subjected to…
picking up a ball, and putting it back down. The task is so easy that…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Hmm. Good question. I’m not exactly sure how to explain it,
partly because I don’t understand it that well. But from what I understand, the Hook is what grabs the reader’s attention. Like in my story, for example, the “hook” would be when Neveah gives birth to Hanna. It disrupts Sef’s natural world, however, it doesn’t really force her to…[Read more] -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
….in caves in the mountains, along the streets, anywhere that makes surviving as hard as possible…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
This is all I’ve written in the next chapter:
The next morning, Lilitu walked out of his room, wearing actual clothes this time.
He stopped dead in his tracks when he saw Sef sleeping on the couch. Then all the memories from last night came rushing back. Why was she here? What had happened? Where were his parents?
Sef’s green hair f…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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Introducing the Diffi Cult! The Cult of Diffi worships the god Diffi, who teaches that absolutely everything one does should be as difficult to do as possible. The god Diffi makes everything so hard for itself that it’s…
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, that could be interesting. The perception thing I still think if given to the right person with the right mental discipline, they could do a lot if there isn’t so much of a specific form of “power” you receive. Perhaps it could always be intellectual power, or influential power, ect. If that were the case though, if you could give up…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Reply Abnormality in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 5 months ago
I’ve noticed this as well.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Fair enough. I feel like there could be logical loopholes still to get around that. Like in the case of getting a robotic arm to replace an existing arm, what if you control your perception enough, to say “I give my “flesh arm” for a “metal appendage with these qualities” or something like that. As long as you can convince yourself that it…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom
Here’s my next chapter… if you have romance, LOOK AWAY lol!
Chapter 6: Raindrops
Lilitu was sitting on the steps, minding his own business, like any sensible person would do.
He was watching the wind sway the trees, listening to their whispers.
Often, he would sit and try to make sense of what…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 2 years, 5 months ago
Lol!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 2 years, 5 months ago
Aww! So sweet!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 2 years, 5 months ago
“Kiss for motivation?”
“In your dreams Walton.”
She roughly grabbed Hugo by the neck of his shirt and began to drag him towards the building, “Let’s get going!”
I love that!!! Hugo is so cute! I love him!!! (the ammount of times I’ve said that is concerning…)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Okay, yeah I get that. Naming chapters is hard!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Livia
“Yeah,” Liv agreed, “though that might not stop Xandro from going to Lukas.”
“Oh, dear,” Callie laughed.
“Is this the store?” Livia asked.
“Yep!” Callista said, and the three of them entered the store.
“I just hope they don’t have any restrictions on horses, because that might be a problem,” Liv whispered.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
WHAT??? AHH THEY’RE SO CUTE! :)))
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
oooh! I like those! thanks!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Yeah. Such is the life of a writer.
My friends all stay up late scrolling TikTok…and then there’s me, plotting my story XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Wow. I usually just spend my nights making #hottoline boards! jk
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
We’re going to have to use a Deus Ex Machina to get them out of the swamp alive…that thing sounds terrifying! lol!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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