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@whalekeeper

Thanks for sharing!

I think I was able to follow along pretty well, there was a lot of context I didn’t have, but it was still digestible as a whole!

If the pen is mightier than the sword, why do actions speak louder than words?

@kyronthearcanin

Thanks! 🙂

@kyronthearcanin

Of course, sorry if I come off as a know it all when I point anything out. My own worldbuilding is also very incomplete, and I agree on the list thing. Maybe I should start posting some chapters of my WIP sometime, though it gets a little creepy at parts, but it would be nice to have a nice set of critiques as well.

@kyronthearcanin

That’s true, but side would be very hard for them to keep balanced, unless they were double sided, or just super small. Then once again, there’s the neck issue. If they never developed much for military, living in peace with one another as well as with the other races, then it would make sense that they don’t really develop their…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, I suppose that makes a little more sense for the Felisaro, though even with that, this is going to be a major hindrance to their development as a race in comparison to the others as @keilah-h mentioned, but there is a lot of interesting dynamics you could get into with that if you wanted. Using short range weapons still seems…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah, that would make for some interesting history! Btw, @kyronthearcanin , do the Arcanin also use their mouths, or do they use some other method, like their magic?

@kyronthearcanin If you don’t want to listen to our suggestions over the course of this discussion, you don’t have to! We’re just brainstorming, I guess.

Yep XD

Would anyone like some fresh questions to ponder?

Who has tasted protons before?

What do protons taste like?

When did you taste said protons?

Where did you taste said protons?

Why did you taste said protons?

How did you taste said protons?

@keilah-h

Right, yeah that would make sense, but don’t the Arcanin also walk on all fours? As their known as the kind you don’t want to recon with, being seen as by far the most powerful of all of them?

@keilah-h @kyronthearcanin

Thanks! The issue with that though is it seems already pretty well established that the Felisaro somehow get around this, and are quite advanced. Unless they did take longer to advance, or maybe even piggy backed of from some of the others, but even that would come with a wide set of difficulties, going back again to…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, I’m so sorry for not responding to this after so long, I just now was able to get around to reading it. It’s really good! I like the cast of characters you got going, and you really seem to be building up on the idea of whether or not Quelin is friend or foe, is that going to turn into a major theme or arc?

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@euodia-vision

Oh, not at all. I was just thinking that it would make sense that his name as a whole maintained the same roots, so I stuck with Indian origin. It could be intentionally not of the same origin, representing a foreign evil that took root in him, although that sounds like it would become more of a cultural commentary, which I’m…[Read more]

@folith-feolin

Did you know only one of the 56 founding fathers was a member of the clergy?

(Nup, but it makes sense to me, as too many would likely lead religion to become too politically involved.)

(Also in addition Jefferson was a very interesting person religiously speaking and just in general. As his beliefs are a bit complicated I’m just g…

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@otherworldlyhistorian

“As for Jesus of Nazareth, my Opinion of whom you particularly desire, I think the system of Morals and his Religion as he left them to us, the best the World ever saw, or is likely to see; but I apprehend it has received various corrupting Changes, and I have, with most of the present Dissenters in England, some Doubts to h…

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@felicity

(Hey sorry for not getting back to you sooner! I was in bed sick and my brain was certainly not in the mood for deep discussions in question form! I’m feeling much better now, so we’ll see how this goes.)

(No worries! I’m glad your feeling better!!!)

(Geometry is definitely a puzzle piece to reality. (love the pun there.)) Do not all p…

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@princesachronicle22 @godlyfantasy12

(I ended up not having enough time, lol, but here it is now:) )

Liren

A strange knowing emanated from Kirrtes when the woman walked up. She held a calculated look. Her grey blue eye gaze turned towards the blade I bore.

“Well hello there!” The man beside me said, “So what’s your name?” Namal stood silent, w…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Love Viola btw, I somehow missed her earlier, I’m excited to see where this goes!

@godlyfantasy12

I don’t think I have too much time right now, but I’ll try to do Liren’s really quick!

@light-warrior-pen

Sounds fun! Good job for finishing it by the way! So it’s basically a spy adventure romance? I’ll think on that, is it also a comedy?

@lightoverdarkness6

This is so good! Thanks for sharing, but how are they going to get out of there???? Is Dylan going to try coning Vance or something??? Don’t let them get hurt anymore!