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    Jenna Terese
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      @rochellaine

      I’ll actually be on now for a bit. 🙂


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      #78918
      Rochellaine
      @rochellaine
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        @jenwriter17 Hey!  I’m here now.  I’m not sure how long I can stay, but I might be on again later tonight too.

        How’s it going?  What are you working on at present?

        "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

        #78919
        Jenna Terese
        @jenwriter17
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          @rochellaine

          HI! 😀

          I’m doing well. And you? I’m working on a blog post and a little outlining for my superhero novel. I’ve figured out a good chunk of it, but I’m having to really work my brain muscles to figure out what happens between a certain two plot points. How about you?

          How are the horses? (you gotta know I was gonna ask that 😛 )

          I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
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          #78920
          Rochellaine
          @rochellaine
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            @jenwriter17

            I’m doing great. 🙂

            Oh, it’s so painful when you know exactly what happens at two different points but can’t figure out how to get from one to the other, isn’t it? 😛

            I’m looking at a short story I wrote a while ago and trying to figure out how to expand it into a short novel…that’s not going overly well. 😉

            The horses are doing really well!  They started gaining weight too fast once spring hit us and their pasture is huge, so we had to get them muzzles.  We had a riding instructor come a few days ago to tell us how to retrain the paint, and now a few of my siblings have had a chance to ride her.  The instructor said we would need a more experienced trainer to help with the thoroughbred, and she recommended someone, so we’ll probably be having him come help us with the thoroughbred soon.

            "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

            #78921
            Jenna Terese
            @jenwriter17
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              @rochellaine

              *groans* yes, it is.

              I find it hard to expand shorter stories into longer ones. How do you go about doing that?

              That’s awesome that the paint is making progress. 😀 I hope the thoroughbred will too once that trainer works with him.

              I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
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              #78922
              Rochellaine
              @rochellaine
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                @jenwriter17

                Well, I’ve done it before, but it was five or six years ago.  I expanded a story that was about ten or twenty pages long into a 100 page short book.  That’s what I want to do with this one.  I’m trying to remember what I did, and I’m not sure exactly.  I’m going to look through that book and see if I can get any ideas.

                I think the best way will probably be to add more character depth and a subplot or something.  But if I’m going to add a subplot, I first have to figure out what subplot to add. 😛

                "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                #78923
                Jenna Terese
                @jenwriter17
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                  @rochellaine

                  Okay, well I hope the story-expanding works out! 😉

                  I have to leave now (I don’t think I’ll be on later). Nice talking with you!

                  I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
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                  #78924
                  Rochellaine
                  @rochellaine
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                    @jenwriter17 Okay, bye!  I hope to talk to you again soon!

                    "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                    #78925
                    Catwing
                    @catwing
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                      @jenwriter I missed you by that much… *Get Smart reference*


                      @rochellaine
                      Hello! *Waves*

                      IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

                      #78926
                      Rochellaine
                      @rochellaine
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                        @catwing Hello!  Are you working on anything at the moment?

                        "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                        #78927
                        Catwing
                        @catwing
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                          @Rochellaine Checking up on some stuff and writing my blog post. 🙂

                          How’s your story going?

                          IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

                          #78928
                          Joy
                          @dekreel
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                            @rochellaine  @catwing

                            Hey, y’all! How are you doing? I’m here mostly to hang out. 😛

                            You can pronounce it however you want.

                            #78929
                            Rochellaine
                            @rochellaine
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                              @catwing What’s your post about?

                              It’s going very slowly. 🙂


                              @dekreel
                              I’m doing great!  How are you?

                              "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                              #78930
                              Joy
                              @dekreel
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                                @rochellaine  I’m okay.

                                (Shoot, I came to talk but don’t know what to say now. . .)

                                You can pronounce it however you want.

                                #78931
                                Catwing
                                @catwing
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                                  @dekreel I’m doing pretty well today.
                                  I’m doing more art now. I drew some fanart today for a book I recently read, “If This Were a Story” Have you read that book?


                                  @rochellaine
                                  It’s an interview with Mr. McGrove the librarian. 🙂

                                  Same.

                                  IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

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