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  • #15685
    BlueJay
    @bluejay
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      @daeus my interpretation is:
      Though @kate-flournoy is unable to join us in writing, she is blessing the world because of her absences from us.
      I have no idea what you where thinking…what were you thinking???

      #15686
      Daeus
      @daeus
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        I was thinking a straight forward poem would be meaningless and that ambiguity is often synonymous with depth. I think I can support your interpretation though. It sounds like a good one.

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        #15687
        Daeus
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          I don’t mean of course that ambiguity is synonymous with depth in the way modern poets take that axiom, but I mean in the sense of making imagery universal and subtle.

          …if that makes any sense.

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          #15701
          Kate Flournoy
          @kate-flournoy
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            What meaning would you give it, by the way?

            Ummm… something along the lines of what @Bluejay said, @Daeus, though I was more thinking somehow mankind was more blessed to see the fragments of something than they would have been to see it whole. Like, maybe brokenness was more beautiful… or useful…or something…heh. πŸ˜›
            I actually have millions of such theories about brokenness, believe it or not. πŸ˜‰

            I don’t mean of course that ambiguity is synonymous with depth in the way modern poets take that axiom, but I mean in the sense of making imagery universal and subtle.

            …if that makes any sense.

            Yes. It does. I know exactly what you mean.

            Daeus
            @daeus
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              hmm… I like that theory. Not everything is better broken, but a lot of things are.

              And then maybe too it’s a parable about how we see a use in something when a greater use is intended for it that we could have never seen.

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              #15703
              Kate Flournoy
              @kate-flournoy
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                @Daeus yes. It could be that as well.

                If you’re writing now, I’m available…

                Daeus
                @daeus
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                  @kate-flournoy Well, if you’re still writing, I’m all go.

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                  #15705
                  Kate Flournoy
                  @kate-flournoy
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                    @Daeus yes I am. I will be until… eh… ten thirty? You good till then?

                    Daeus
                    @daeus
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                      @kate-flournoy Should be good.

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                      #15708
                      Daeus
                      @daeus
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                        @kate-flournoy Got three chapters edited on yet another pass through TATHOF.

                        What were you working on?

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                        #15709
                        Kate Flournoy
                        @kate-flournoy
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                          @Daeus awesome. I’m trying to get Harold out— eh, never mind. Spoilers. πŸ˜‰ I’m continuing the rewrite of Uncharted, and I got 1,067 words written. I’m also very pleased with what I wrote, which is rare. πŸ˜› I’m at a very crowded, intricate place right now, so I was pleased that I could manage it carefully and still get something that snapped, if you know what I mean.

                          By the way, I’ve been working some with Harold. Trying what you said about ‘the said unsaid’ and stuff. And let me tell you right now he has since shocked me over and over. I did a little brainstorming session, and its like he just jumped right out of my hands and starting writing himself. Don’t get me wrong, he still needs work, but he’s taken over now. He’s now showing me what kind of person he is, instead of the other way around.
                          It’s one of those staggering phenomena that happen sometimes without an explanation.

                          Daeus
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                            @kate-flournoy Hehehe (That was Harold)

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                            #15712
                            Kate Flournoy
                            @kate-flournoy
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                              Daeus
                              @daeus
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                                @kate-flournoy Are you writing anymore today?

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                                #15716
                                Kate Flournoy
                                @kate-flournoy
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                                  @Daeus I will be after two fifteen. I will tag you then.

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