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@alia Fine, I think. I’m trying to describe a church…hopefully without offending people. 😉
"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
@rochellaine, what type of church is it?
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Kapeefer til we're old and grey@alia Just a normal, good church. I just want to describe it as a church that believes and preaches the Bible, which is what’s important. I’m just afraid that in describing it I’ll add other things that might make people think I believe you need those to make a good church, while I really believe taking the Bible literally is the important thing and everything else comes after.
So I’m just trying to put the emphasis on the Bible, and not the music or clothing or whatever else people usually think makes a church good or bad. Does that make sense?
"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
Oh hi! I’d just assumed everyone was gone so I was doing some reading.
Rochellaine, how’s the Western? I’ve missed you these last couple days.
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
Haha…good luck.
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
@rochellaine, yeah, it does. I think if you focus on what the Bible says it should turn out fine.
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Kapeefer til we're old and greyYes…despite it all (the coughing, the sneezing, the headaches.) I live!
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
@seekjustice Hello, hello!! I’ve missed you too, though it might not seem so since I wasn’t on either. 😉 The Western…goes okay. As you see, I have a bit of a dilemma. 😛 I think I’m going to focus more on the people than the church procedure, and that should work out fine. Especially since it’s the people I want my characters to meet, rather than the church service they need to listen to at this point in the story.
Are you feeling better? How’s editing? Are you going to send me those dimensions sometime? 😉
@alia I think so too. 🙂 How are your characters doing? Have you killed any yet? If you have, you probably shouldn’t tell me, though… 😛"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
@seekjustice, what are you working on?
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Kapeefer til we're old and grey@rochellaine, some side characters, but no important ones…yet
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Kapeefer til we're old and greyI’m not working on anything currently since its Sunday here, I’m just listening to Les Mis and being miserable.
I feel better, but I don’t feel great. I’ve reached Chessy’s first meeting with the revolutionaries in the Cafe, and I remember someone saying those scenes were a bit slow, so I’m trying to liven them up a little. I haven’t been well though, so I haven’t worked on it for a while.
Whoops…dimensions. Hopefully I’ll do it first thing tomorrow morning.
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
@seekjustice, can I read your sequel?
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Kapeefer til we're old and greyOh yeah, sure! Give me a sec…
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
@seekjustice, thank you
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Kapeefer til we're old and grey@seekjustice, @rochellaine, I have a question. what is the difference between beta and alpha readers?
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