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    Rochellaine
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      @alia Fine, I think. I’m trying to describe a church…hopefully without offending people. 😉

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      #73674
      Alia
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        @rochellaine, what type of church is it?

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        #73675
        Rochellaine
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          @alia Just a normal, good church.  I just want to describe it as a church that believes and preaches the Bible, which is what’s important.  I’m just afraid that in describing it I’ll add other things that might make people think I believe you need those to make a good church, while I really believe taking the Bible literally is the important thing and everything else comes after.

          So I’m just trying to put the emphasis on the Bible, and not the music or clothing or whatever else people usually think makes a church good or bad.  Does that make sense?

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          SeekJustice
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            @alia @rochellaine

            Oh hi! I’d just assumed everyone was gone so I was doing some reading.

            Rochellaine, how’s the Western? I’ve missed you these last couple days.

            INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

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            SeekJustice
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              @Rochellaine

              Haha…good luck.

              INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

              #73678
              Alia
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                @rochellaine, yeah, it does. I think if you focus on what the Bible says it should turn out fine.


                @seekjustice
                , you live!

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                #73679
                SeekJustice
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                  @alia

                  Yes…despite it all (the coughing, the sneezing, the headaches.) I live!

                  INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

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                  Rochellaine
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                    @seekjustice Hello, hello!!  I’ve missed you too, though it might not seem so since I wasn’t on either. 😉  The Western…goes okay.  As you see, I have a bit of a dilemma. 😛  I think I’m going to focus more on the people than the church procedure, and that should work out fine.  Especially since it’s the people I want my characters to meet, rather than the church service they need to listen to at this point in the story.

                    Are you feeling better?  How’s editing?  Are you going to send me those dimensions sometime? 😉


                    @alia
                    I think so too. 🙂  How are your characters doing?  Have you killed any yet?  If you have, you probably shouldn’t tell me, though… 😛

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                    #73681
                    Alia
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                      @seekjustice, what are you working on?

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                      #73682
                      Alia
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                        @rochellaine, some side characters, but no important ones…yet

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                        #73683
                        SeekJustice
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                          @alia

                          I’m not working on anything currently since its Sunday here, I’m just listening to Les Mis and being miserable.


                          @rochellaine

                          I feel better, but I don’t feel great. I’ve reached Chessy’s first meeting with the revolutionaries in the Cafe, and I remember someone saying those scenes were a bit slow, so I’m trying to liven them up a little. I haven’t been well though, so I haven’t worked on it for a while.

                          Whoops…dimensions. Hopefully I’ll do it first thing tomorrow morning.

                          INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                          #73684
                          Alia
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                            @seekjustice, can I read your sequel?

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                            #73685
                            SeekJustice
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                              @alia

                              Oh yeah, sure! Give me a sec…

                              INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                              #73686
                              Alia
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                                @seekjustice, thank you

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                                #73687
                                Alia
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                                  @seekjustice, @rochellaine, I have a question. what is the difference between beta and alpha readers?

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