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  • #57395
    SeekJustice
    @seekjustice
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      Here’s its link if you want to have a look.

      https://anordinarypen.wordpress.com

      I’m just  trying to get some posts scheduled before I go away after Christmas.

      INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

      #57396
      Anonymous
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        @dekreel Sorry. I had to have dinner, then dishes. 😉 Why thank you. @shannon’s helped me a lot with some of the plot issues I’ve had. We like to write in our treehouse, and since I don’t like to be alone for very long (ESFJ that I am ;)) it works out great. I can ask her all the questions I want. 😀

        Btw, congrats on your word count! That’s awesome!

        #57398
        Catwing
        @catwing
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          @shannon @emily @seekjustice

          @dekreel
          (Have I shown up in your KPA yet?)
          I’m editing my Kapeefer Literature.
          If you guys want to critic it…
          A Catwing Christmas

          IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

          #57399
          Alia
          @alia
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            Hey all, I left to watch the new star wars movie and never signed off. But I am back now

            WIP - Decisions
            Kapeefer til we're old and grey

            #57401
            Catwing
            @catwing
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              Welcome @alia
              You can look at the link too if you want.

              IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

              #57402
              Alia
              @alia
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                @catwing, YAY

                 

                WIP - Decisions
                Kapeefer til we're old and grey

                #57405
                Anonymous
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                  @catwing *applauds* very good. I did change the spelling of Ethryndal. You kept spelling it with a e instead of a y. So I added a couple suggestions to fix it ; )

                  #57406
                  Alia
                  @alia
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                    @catwing, its good, really good.

                    WIP - Decisions
                    Kapeefer til we're old and grey

                    #57408
                    Catwing
                    @catwing
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                      @shannon Thanks! I forgot how you spelled her name. *nervous laughter*

                      @alia
                      Thank you!
                      Do you guys have any suggestions for this one or the next one?

                      IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

                      #57409
                      SeekJustice
                      @seekjustice
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                        @catwing I really enjoyed it, but I thought you rushed the ending a bit, so maybe you could lengthen it a tad?

                        Other than that it was really good and it stayed true to the spirit of Kapeefer. 🙂

                        INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                        #57410
                        Alia
                        @alia
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                          @catwing, I agree with @seekjustice with it feeling rushed, but it also didn’t feel much like an ending

                          WIP - Decisions
                          Kapeefer til we're old and grey

                          #57411
                          Joy
                          @dekreel
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                            @catwing YAYYY! Your KPA!


                            @seekjustice
                              Can I see your blog please? 😀

                            You can pronounce it however you want.

                            #57412
                            Catwing
                            @catwing
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                              @seekjustice alrighty then I’ll make it less rushed. (Yeah I did rush cause it’s a bit of a Christmas story *shrug*)
                              Thank you. *florishes a bow* More is yet to come.
                              Sorry y’all haven’t showed up yet (also @shannon @alia )
                              Anything you want in there?

                              IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

                              #57413
                              Catwing
                              @catwing
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                                @alia There will be more parts that’s why it isn’t much of an ending.
                                I will fix the rush!

                                @dekreel
                                did you read it? What do you think?

                                IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!

                                #57414
                                Alia
                                @alia
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                                  @catwing, yes, in fact. if I’m in the next one make me the perfect character. kidding, that would be boring.

                                  Oh, theres a cliché for you. the perfect boring character that accidentally makes into every book that the author thinks is going to be everyones favorite character. but is really everyones least favorite.

                                  • This reply was modified 6 years, 11 months ago by Alia.

                                  WIP - Decisions
                                  Kapeefer til we're old and grey

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