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@gracie-j chapter 1. But there’s a livestream by an author tuber named Sara Lubratt and 3 my time (may be a different time for others) so I’m gonna join that and see if it’ll help me get to work lol.
Maybe if u have time u can join.
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#ProtectSeb@gracie-j Sooo did no one have any critiques on my prologue or does no one want to share them….? 😆
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#ProtectSebI’ll stay around! I’m sitting in a coffee shop right now doing a little writing ^-^ Well, rewriting rather than new writing… *sigh
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@godlyfantasy12 Girl, I tried to think of something to say about it, but aside from a few cosmetic issues (the basically pointless ones you’ll catch reading over it with fresh eyes), I didn’t see anything wrong with it! I may go over it again if you’re hurting for some feedback. 😉
@gracie-j wow! Okay, thanks!! That makes me happy lol! Once I edit my chapter 1 to the best I may put it on here As well and then that’ll probably be it for now. I think the prologue turned out good but I would later like feedback on chapter 1, just because I’m not sure if it’s gonna be as well done. Hopefully it will be, and if it is then I don’t have to worry anymore cuz I know I can do this lol
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#ProtectSeb@writerlexi1216 Nice! I’ve wanted to be able to go somewhere and sit and write or edit, but don’t really get the chance too often. I’m gonna be getting some Starbucks later tho (which I’ll have to reheat because it’s being brought to me)
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@godlyfantasy12 🙂 I’d love to read Chapter 1! And you can do this, I promise you!
@gracie-j Thank you 😊 So if nothing changes we’re bringing my pups in!! I’m so so happy!! We haven’t had them in since last week. We usually have them in once every week, but it was looking like we weren’t gonna get them in till next weekend, but now we might be bringing them inside!!!
I LOVE MY BEAGLE BABIES!!!
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Anyone around? I’ll be here for about an hour…
@gracie-j I’m here but haven’t been doing any writing or editing. Holidays and all.
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#ProtectSebHappy holidays to you too! How’s your book going?
We crazy people are the normal ones.
Also, how are your beagles doing?
We crazy people are the normal ones.
Also, do you guys have any opinion on Fabian staying alive throughout the series (if I do it)? I think that if I made a sequel(s) to this one story or turned it into one novel I’d have to keep Fabian alive because he could keep the story going.
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@scoutfinch180 Sorry I missed ya! 🙁 So, I would definitely keep Fabian alive. I was actually really sad when he died, so I would reconfigure that. I’d love to see him and Jade reconciled!
Haven’t really worked on it. Just been giving myself some time away because I haven’t felt like working on it and I know I’m gonna wanna hit the ground running in January.
And my beagles are good! That day I said we were bringing them in we had a scare with Sally, our first beagle (and momma to our other one Raven). She got a piece of wood lodged in her mouth and it upset us soooo bad!!! She’s been through a lot in her little life, poor baby. But she’s okay now thank the Lord! He has protected her so many times, I just am so thankful He cares about what we care about.
We’re probably gonna get them in again this weekend to open their gifts and everything 😊
ALSO MERRY CHRISTMAS EVE EVERYONE!!!
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