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@freedomwriter76
Aww that’s just the cutest 🥰🥰
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
@freedomwriter76
Oh also does Reuben have a love interest? I have ideas for a scene I want to write XD
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
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Oh thanks 😅 I’ll definitely try it, don’t know if I’ll have too much time tomorrow since my uncle’s visiting with his family, but I’ll tag you guys if you do!
Nice @Freedom!
Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis
@freedomwriter76
Aw, thank you Freedom that’s so sweet of you, I lOve it!! 😘
Aaahhhhh, the colors… the pretties… the shinies… 😍🥰
That’s true, I do write a lot of description! Charrie aesthetics have always been my bread and butter. I think I spend altogether too much time describing things XD Very accurate observation on your part.
(And that’s very likely to happen, he talks to arrogant rich dudes all the time… and they’ve rubbed off on him XD)
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@whalekeeper Aww, I’m so happy you liked it 🥰🥰💖💖 Yesss, and your descriptions are so descriptive I can actually SEE the characters in my head 😘
(haha…that makes sense 😂😂)
@hybridlore aww, tysm, glad you liked it! 😀
@mineralizedwritings Thx!!!And yes…he does have a love interest, but not until he moves to America. Her name is Anna Grace…she’s Southern, sweet, but a little fierce, but she’s only fierce with those she loves. 🙂 I have a reference pic of her if you want it 💖
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Yeah, what does she look like? And at this time is Reuben living alone in a apartment? With his brother ect?
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@mineralizedwritings He’s probably living alone in an apartment, yeah…since Leo, Joshua, and Jakob are married and Wolfgang is off at Stanford University School of Medicine for a doctorate…so yeahh, poor Reuben is alone, but Leo, Joshua, and Jakob live close by. 😉
Here’s a pic of Anna Grace!! 💖
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OH, and if you want this too…though his hair is a darker brown, Reuben kinda looks like this by that time.
Ma boi grows up even faster 🥰😘
@freedomwriter76
Ok, finally going to do this!! Just wrote something short, I tried to copy the scenes I’ve read from their book 😉 I hope it feels like your writing!
Wolfgang
He closed his book and sat up, looking around the small room at his brothers. Jakob and Leo were talking, Reuben finishing a sketch, and Joshua with his Bible open.
“…we have to do something.” Jakob sounded angry. As usual.
Leo shook his head. “We can’t do anything… not right now.” He glanced at Wolfgang, who was listening, and then turned his gaze back to Jakob. “It’s too dangerous.”
Why did his brothers argue so much?
Wolfgang knew Jakob was angry about the way Leo was treated at work… the way they were all treated… but there was nothing they could do, right?
Even their own family was against them… what chance did they stand against the Nazis?
He focused back on his brothers. Joshua was talking now. “Jakob… I know you’re angry, but… this won’t change anything.”Reuben looked up from his sketching. “It would… Leo wouldn’t be hurt so much…” he said softly.
Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis
Anndd, here’s yours, lol 😉 I don’t know if you saw, but I posted some notes about your writing on page… 2?
Anyway! I did Falon for this one 🙂
Falon
Falon looked up from the punching bag as Steve came in. “You okay?” he asked.
“Yeah just busy,” Falon told him, brushing her hands off. “Why?”
Steve raised his eyebrows. “A little early for training.”
Falon shrugged. The truth was she’d been up all night after her first failed mission yesterday.
“You know it wasn’t your fault, right?” Steve asked.
Falon shrugged again. It had been, there were people who didn’t make it because of her mistake. She turned back to the training bag.
“You should have seen my first mission,” Nat said from behind Steve. She stepped into the room and gave a small chuckle, thinking back to it.
“We all make mistakes.” Steve cleared his throat to get Fallon to look at him. “What’s important is we keep trying.”
Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis
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Thanks! I might have to make up some stuff to fill in blanks lol. Also… Reubsy is so big now?!
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
Girl!!!!
I didn’t even see your notes, but… it made my day
And your writing was perfect!!!! And Falon!!! She would hate so much to fail a mission, and the fact that you had Steve and Nat was perfect,
*aplauds* perfect
You’re a wonderful writer, and our styles are honestly pretty similar
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneAww I’m so glad!!! ☺️ Yeah, I thought you missed it, but that’s ok 😅 the notifications are being glitchy again.
Thanks!! I tried to get it right, even though it was pretty short 😉
Thank you so much!! Yeah, I know I said I was gonna do first, but… Lol Idk, I just did third xD
I’m glad you liked it!! It was really fun!!
I really like this idea, btw! ❤️
Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis
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@hybridlore ahh, girl, tysm for doing that!!!! 💖💖💖
I absolutely loved that!!!!!!! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
@freedomwriter76
Of course!!!! 😉 It was pretty fun, actually, I don’t think I got it perfect at all but it was interesting to put myself in someone else’s writing style 😅
I’m glad you liked it, too!!
Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis
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