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@whalekeeper Ellipses are too much fun XXD And yes, inner monologue is just something I love to write…I love getting into character’s heads ??
AND y’all…ok, I love Steve&Bucky both…I think we all already know that I like muscular guys, alright? ??? (legit the only girl out of my closest family that does…Mom and Sis both think the guys look like boulders if they’re really muscular ??)
@mineralizedwritings I ADORE accents like that in writing…makes a character so much more memorable!!!!! ? not too many of mine do…except for Ezra. My Kentucky boi has such a thick Southern accent, and I love it maybe a little too much ?
@smiley lol…you do, but I think you just don’t notice it, same as I didn’t notice mine until everyone started pointing things out ??I’ve noticed that you have a habit of writing a lot of thoughts/memories/emotions, and a LOT of flashbacks too, and inner monologue and your sentences tend to be a bit longer, and I’ve also noticed that you sometimes tie scenery into the mood/emotions of the characters, and you tend to write in a sort of omniscient POV…just a few things I did notice ?
@hybridlore awww, I’m so glad you love my charrie babies ?? I’m so glad I can make them relatable for people…tysm for all of your sweet words, girl!!!!Hehe…I love my short and long sentences XXD
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Of course!!! ❤❤
Yep, me tooo XD I have a habit of using sentences like,
The first ten seconds are like an eternity. My palms scrape against the brick. The wall scuffs the side of my shoe. The street seems a mile away.
Tbf, the character was nervous here, and she’s sort of afraid of heights, soo…
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
@freedomwriter76
Awww thanks girl, that just made my day
It made me feel like a real writer XD
And you described my style so well, and I didn’t even realize it was my style
I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.”
Isaiah 43:1@freedomwriter76
XD awww i didn’t know he had a accent
"Past or future... let them be."
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@hybridlore ooh, I really love that writing tho!!! ???
@smiley aww, girl, I’m so happy i could make your day ???aww, so glad I could describe it well for you, and girllll, of course you’re a writer!!!! A learning writer, as we all are, but a writer nonetheless!! ??
@mineralizedwritings hehe…he does XXD“You didn’t think I’d forget you, did you, darlin’? I brought you some roses.”
my Southern Kentucky boi…???
his accent is heavier when he’s mad, which makes it even better ?
@freedomwriter76
Aw, thanks ?
“You didn’t think I’d forget you, did you, darlin’? I brought you some roses.”
my Southern Kentucky boi…???Awww…
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@hybridlore You’re very welcome ????
Hehe…yesss, I love my Ezra ??XXD
(i don’t talk/write about him enough ?)
I want to try this but I’m kinda scared to mess up someone’s style, lol, especially since I normally write in first person and it feels like all of you guys (except @kyronthearcanin) use third ?
Does anyone want to be copied? XD
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
I think smiley writes in first person. At least that’s what I remember ? And don’t be scared – even if you don’t really capture their style, they’d still appreciate the effort!
I am out of signature ideas
OH yeah, I have seen her do that before… Ok, I’ll try it, thanks ?
Is this page down for anyone else? It only worked cause I clicked on it in my email…
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
So yeah, if you want me to, I could try to copy your style, but umm… I really don’t know too much about your ocs, lol ?
@anyone-else, too
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C.S.L.
You could use my fanfics
a fanfic of a fanfic XD
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@hybridlore you’re free to copy me if you want ?
and I may or may not be working on writing something for someone on here…?
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we’ll see how well I do…XXD
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@whalekeeper Sooo…I’ve noticed that you write long descriptions, and that you always make sure to describe a character…and thus, I wrote this super short thing. ?
My brain was a little dead…and I didn’t trust myself to write more, so I wrote just a little XXD
Anywhoooo…I wrote this.
And yes, I used Sebastian…he’s probably my fav ?
The man’s smile curled. He was short-short with a refined face, carefully chiseled, perhaps-with an air of superiority. His clothes spoke of royalty, with a majestic, long fur coat that dragged the marbled floor. His hair was brown, the color of late autumn and early winter. A cane rested at his side; his long fingers curled around it.
Everything about him attested to his wealth and his all-too loud arrogance.
“What has brought you to this place?”
“I am here for my own perfectly reasonable reasons,” the man’s eyes glinted, like strong steel. “And all I ask is to be accepted.”
Sebastian couldn’t help but chuckle, for that was arrogance, stronger than he’d ever witnessed.
“We’ll see if acceptance is something you can earn.”
I actually haven’t read enough about your charries or read enough of your writing…fingers crossed that I at least did it a little bit of justice ? (also, no clue who Sebastian is talking to…just some random rich dude ??)
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