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July 18, 2023 at 11:39 am #151335Anonymous
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@whalekeeper Ellipses are too much fun XXD And yes, inner monologue is just something I love to write…I love getting into character’s heads ππ₯°
AND y’all…ok, I love Steve&Bucky both…I think we all already know that I like muscular guys, alright? πππ (legit the only girl out of my closest family that does…Mom and Sis both think the guys look like boulders if they’re really muscular π€£π€£)
@mineralizedwritings I ADORE accents like that in writing…makes a character so much more memorable!!!!! π€© not too many of mine do…except for Ezra. My Kentucky boi has such a thick Southern accent, and I love it maybe a little too much π
@smiley lol…you do, but I think you just don’t notice it, same as I didn’t notice mine until everyone started pointing things out ππI’ve noticed that you have a habit of writing a lot of thoughts/memories/emotions, and a LOT of flashbacks too, and inner monologue and your sentences tend to be a bit longer, and I’ve also noticed that you sometimes tie scenery into the mood/emotions of the characters, and you tend to write in a sort of omniscient POV…just a few things I did notice π
@hybridlore awww, I’m so glad you love my charrie babies π₯°π₯° I’m so glad I can make them relatable for people…tysm for all of your sweet words, girl!!!!Hehe…I love my short and long sentences XXD
July 18, 2023 at 11:47 am #151340@freedomwriter76
Of course!!! β€β€
Yep, me tooo XD I have a habit of using sentences like,
Β Β The first ten seconds are like an eternity. My palms scrape against the brick. The wall scuffs the side of my shoe. The street seems a mile away.
Tbf, the character was nervous here, and she’s sort of afraid of heights, soo…
Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis
July 18, 2023 at 12:13 pm #151345@freedomwriter76
Awww thanks girl, that just made my day
It made me feel like a real writer XD
And you described my style so well, and I didn’t even realize it was my style
Do me a favorβ¦. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneJuly 18, 2023 at 12:48 pm #151352@freedomwriter76
XD awww i didn’t know he had a accent
"And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."
July 18, 2023 at 2:32 pm #151382Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@hybridlore ooh, I really love that writing tho!!! πππ
@smiley aww, girl, I’m so happy i could make your day πππaww, so glad I could describe it well for you, and girllll, of course you’re a writer!!!! A learning writer, as we all are, but a writer nonetheless!! π₯°π₯°
@mineralizedwritings hehe…he does XXDβYou didnβt think Iβd forget you, did you, darlinβ? I brought you some roses.β
my Southern Kentucky boi…πππ
his accent is heavier when he’s mad, which makes it even better π
July 18, 2023 at 2:36 pm #151384@freedomwriter76
Aw, thanks π
βYou didnβt think Iβd forget you, did you, darlinβ? I brought you some roses.β
my Southern Kentucky boiβ¦πππAwww…
Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis
July 18, 2023 at 2:41 pm #151388Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@hybridlore You’re very welcome ππππ
Hehe…yesss, I love my Ezra π₯°πXXD
(i don’t talk/write about him enough π)
July 18, 2023 at 5:16 pm #151429I want to try this but I’m kinda scared to mess up someone’s style, lol, especially since I normally write in first person and it feels like all of you guys (except @kyronthearcanin) use third π
Does anyone want to be copied? XD
Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis
July 18, 2023 at 5:43 pm #151438I think smiley writes in first person. At least that’s what I remember π And don’t be scared – even if you don’t really capture their style, they’d still appreciate the effort!
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July 18, 2023 at 5:46 pm #151439OH yeah, I have seen her do that before… Ok, I’ll try it, thanks π
Is this page down for anyone else? It only worked cause I clicked on it in my email…
Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis
July 18, 2023 at 5:51 pm #151440So yeah, if you want me to, I could try to copy your style, but umm… I really don’t know too much about your ocs, lol π
@anyone-else, too
Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis
July 18, 2023 at 6:27 pm #151442You could use my fanfics
a fanfic of a fanfic XD
Do me a favorβ¦. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneJuly 18, 2023 at 7:36 pm #151449Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@hybridlore you’re free to copy me if you want π
and I may or may not be working on writing something for someone on here…π
July 18, 2023 at 7:41 pm #151450Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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we’ll see how well I do…XXD
July 18, 2023 at 7:51 pm #151452Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@whalekeeper Sooo…I’ve noticed that you write long descriptions, and that you always make sure to describe a character…and thus, I wrote this super short thing. π
My brain was a little dead…and I didn’t trust myself to write more, so I wrote just a little XXD
Anywhoooo…I wrote this.
And yes, I used Sebastian…he’s probably my fav π
The manβs smile curled. He was short-short with a refined face, carefully chiseled, perhaps-with an air of superiority. His clothes spoke of royalty, with a majestic, long fur coat that dragged the marbled floor. His hair was brown, the color of late autumn and early winter. A cane rested at his side; his long fingers curled around it.
Everything about him attested to his wealth and his all-too loud arrogance.
βWhat has brought you to this place?β
βI am here for my own perfectly reasonable reasons,β the manβs eyes glinted, like strong steel. βAnd all I ask is to be accepted.β
Sebastian couldnβt help but chuckle, for that was arrogance, stronger than heβd ever witnessed.
βWeβll see if acceptance is something you can earn.”
I actually haven’t read enough about your charries or read enough of your writing…fingers crossed that I at least did it a little bit of justice π₯° (also, no clue who Sebastian is talking to…just some random rich dude ππ)
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