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      @whalekeeper Ellipses are too much fun XXD And yes, inner monologue is just something I love to write…I love getting into character’s heads πŸ˜‚πŸ₯°

      AND y’all…ok, I love Steve&Bucky both…I think we all already know that I like muscular guys, alright? πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜Ž (legit the only girl out of my closest family that does…Mom and Sis both think the guys look like boulders if they’re really muscular 🀣🀣)

       


      @mineralizedwritings
      I ADORE accents like that in writing…makes a character so much more memorable!!!!! 🀩 not too many of mine do…except for Ezra. My Kentucky boi has such a thick Southern accent, and I love it maybe a little too much πŸ˜‚

       


      @smiley
      lol…you do, but I think you just don’t notice it, same as I didn’t notice mine until everyone started pointing things out πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

      I’ve noticed that you have a habit of writing a lot of thoughts/memories/emotions, and a LOT of flashbacks too, and inner monologue and your sentences tend to be a bit longer, and I’ve also noticed that you sometimes tie scenery into the mood/emotions of the characters, and you tend to write in a sort of omniscient POV…just a few things I did notice πŸ˜‰

       


      @hybridlore
      awww, I’m so glad you love my charrie babies πŸ₯°πŸ₯° I’m so glad I can make them relatable for people…tysm for all of your sweet words, girl!!!!

      Hehe…I love my short and long sentences XXD

      #151340
      hybridlore
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        @freedomwriter76

        Of course!!! ❀❀

        Yep, me tooo XD I have a habit of using sentences like,

        Β Β  The first ten seconds are like an eternity. My palms scrape against the brick. The wall scuffs the side of my shoe. The street seems a mile away.

        Tbf, the character was nervous here, and she’s sort of afraid of heights, soo…

        Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis

        #151345
        Smiley
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          @freedomwriter76

          Awww thanks girl, that just made my day

          It made me feel like a real writer XD

          And you described my style so well, and I didn’t even realize it was my style

          Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
          -Thorne

          #151352
          MineralizedWritings
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            @freedomwriter76

            XD awww i didn’t know he had a accent

            "And so I left this world just as I had entered it. Confused."

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              @hybridlore ooh, I really love that writing tho!!! πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–


              @smiley
              aww, girl, I’m so happy i could make your day πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—

              aww, so glad I could describe it well for you, and girllll, of course you’re a writer!!!! A learning writer, as we all are, but a writer nonetheless!! πŸ₯°πŸ₯°


              @mineralizedwritings
              hehe…he does XXD

              β€œYou didn’t think I’d forget you, did you, darlin’? I brought you some roses.”

              my Southern Kentucky boi…😍😍😘

              his accent is heavier when he’s mad, which makes it even better πŸ˜‚

              #151384
              hybridlore
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                @freedomwriter76

                Aw, thanks πŸ˜…

                β€œYou didn’t think I’d forget you, did you, darlin’? I brought you some roses.”
                my Southern Kentucky boiβ€¦πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜

                Awww…

                Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis

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                  @hybridlore You’re very welcome πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’–πŸ’–

                  Hehe…yesss, I love my Ezra πŸ₯°πŸ˜XXD

                  (i don’t talk/write about him enough 😭)

                  #151429
                  hybridlore
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                    I want to try this but I’m kinda scared to mess up someone’s style, lol, especially since I normally write in first person and it feels like all of you guys (except @kyronthearcanin) use third πŸ˜…

                    Does anyone want to be copied? XD

                    Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis

                    #151438
                    whaley
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                      @hybridlore

                      I think smiley writes in first person. At least that’s what I remember πŸ˜… And don’t be scared – even if you don’t really capture their style, they’d still appreciate the effort!

                      #ProtectAdolinKholin

                      #151439
                      hybridlore
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                        @whalekeeper

                        OH yeah, I have seen her do that before… Ok, I’ll try it, thanks πŸ˜…

                        Is this page down for anyone else? It only worked cause I clicked on it in my email…

                        Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis

                        #151440
                        hybridlore
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                          @smiley

                          So yeah, if you want me to, I could try to copy your style, but umm… I really don’t know too much about your ocs, lol πŸ˜…

                          @anyone-else, too

                          Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again. ~ C.S. Lewis

                          #151442
                          Smiley
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                            @hybridlore

                            You could use my fanfics

                            a fanfic of a fanfic XD

                            Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
                            -Thorne

                            #151449
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                              @hybridlore you’re free to copy me if you want πŸ˜‚

                               

                              and I may or may not be working on writing something for someone on here…😏

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                                we’ll see how well I do…XXD

                                #151452
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                                  @whalekeeper Sooo…I’ve noticed that you write long descriptions, and that you always make sure to describe a character…and thus, I wrote this super short thing. 😊

                                  My brain was a little dead…and I didn’t trust myself to write more, so I wrote just a little XXD

                                  Anywhoooo…I wrote this.

                                  And yes, I used Sebastian…he’s probably my fav 😘

                                  The man’s smile curled. He was short-short with a refined face, carefully chiseled, perhaps-with an air of superiority. His clothes spoke of royalty, with a majestic, long fur coat that dragged the marbled floor. His hair was brown, the color of late autumn and early winter. A cane rested at his side; his long fingers curled around it.

                                  Everything about him attested to his wealth and his all-too loud arrogance.

                                  β€œWhat has brought you to this place?”

                                  β€œI am here for my own perfectly reasonable reasons,” the man’s eyes glinted, like strong steel. β€œAnd all I ask is to be accepted.”

                                  Sebastian couldn’t help but chuckle, for that was arrogance, stronger than he’d ever witnessed.

                                  β€œWe’ll see if acceptance is something you can earn.”

                                   

                                  I actually haven’t read enough about your charries or read enough of your writing…fingers crossed that I at least did it a little bit of justice πŸ₯° (also, no clue who Sebastian is talking to…just some random rich dude πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚)

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