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  • June 4, 2025 at 10:25 am #203792
    Esther
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      @savannah_grace2009

      I’ll keep watching from the shadows and once the draft is over I’ll give you more input on that XD

      Yes please do!

      Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

      June 4, 2025 at 11:29 am #203797
      Three Ducks in a Trench Coat
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        @esther-c

        Noooooooo Tyler!😭Poor Easton.😭 I’m glad Hallie is starting to come back to God. Antonio is so sweet.🥰

        MARCIE! YOU MADE EGG SOUP!

        June 5, 2025 at 2:53 pm #203854
        Esther
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          @theducktator

          Noooooooo Tyler!😭Poor Easton.😭 I’m glad Hallie is starting to come back to God. Antonio is so sweet.🥰

          I love the smorgasbord of emotions slapped into this post 🤣


          @savannah_grace2009

          I was just thinking about it last night in bed and i realized that what you pointed out about Easton isn’t a huge part of his character arc as far as I remember. So as you read more and I start the third draft, I’m going to really have to pay attention to that, because I don’t want to come off as if I’m ignoring Easton’s behavior, but I also don’t know how well it would merge with the main theme. (I think you’ll see what I mean once you read the completed draft)

          Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

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