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  • February 28, 2025 at 4:42 pm #198783
    Esther
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      @savannah_grace2009

      Ohhhh my wordddd

      Ok that actually makes so much sense. I felt like the story was moving too fast and wasn’t exactly sure how to slow it down.

      Thanks for pointing that out!! <33


      @grcr

      Mmm. If that’s how other books do it, I guess it could work. I looked it up and some people say to extend the vowels and smooth consonants—maybe that could work… like “Jennnnnifer” or “Jennniiiifferr” or something…? Ah, I don’t know…! 🤔

      That’s a good idea… We’ll see I guess! I’ll probably pay attention to those things closer in the third draft. Thank you!!

      Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

      February 28, 2025 at 9:48 pm #198791
      The Most Esteemed Feathered One
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        @esther-c

        In my first draft I actually never wrote a scene of their first study sesh together…do you think I should add that in for the second draft??

        WHAT??? I was looking forward to reading that sooo bad!

        I shall be a vestibule of unhampered sanity.

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