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    Esther
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      Hey everyone!! So my lovely beta-reader ( @hybridlore ) was so awesome in giving me feedback on the first draft of an older WIP (this was the one I had asked for help with a little while back). I’m planning to start digging into the editing phase this week and hopefully have the second draft finished sometime in March (we’ll see… sometimes life decides to get in the way 😜)

      I’ll be sharing the chapters here as I edit them, so some weeks you may get a lot of chapters, and some not so many. I’m hoping that creating a topic for this will keep me on track and help me not procrastinate (I’m aiming for 3-5 chapters a week right now, but it could end up being more. I’m not sure yet how in depth this editing is going to look). I’mma tag a bunch of people, but by no means feel obligated!! I would love your feedback as you’re reading, but if you just want to read for fun, that’s totally fine too! Lmk if you want to be tagged for chapters! (i don’t want you to have to subscribe and then get all the other posts that you might not care about, lol)


      @theducktator
      @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009 @freed_and_redeemed @mineralizedwritings @stephie @theshadow @grcr @traiblazer @lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @the_lost-journal @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @smiley @anybodyyy!

      Here’s the moodboard for the book as a whole (I’m still not 100% satisfied, so I may eventually share a new one. I feel like this one has more vibes rather than like quotes that hint at the theme…idk. XD)

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      Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

      #197819
      Esther
      @esther-c
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        Then moodboard for Hallie, MC 1

        Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

        #197820
        Esther
        @esther-c
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          And Easton…

          Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

          #197821
          Esther
          @esther-c
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            Brooooo

            Ok, KP is glitching really bad for me rn. I’ll try to post his moodboard later. You will just have to wait in suspense 😈🤪

            Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

            #197822
            Esther
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              Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

              #197824
              The Ducktator
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                @esther-c

                Please tag me for chapters! I want the car on Easton’s board sooo bad, but in pink.

                Any salad can be a Caesar salad if you stab it hard enough.

                #197826
                -GRCR-
                @grcr
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                  @esther-c

                  Ooo love the boards! You can tag me too when you share the chapters! I’ll try my best to keep up! 😅😃

                  you're unique—just like everyone else.
                  i've got your nose.

                  #197830
                  SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨
                  @savannah_grace2009
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                    @ESTHER-C
                    YESSS YOU RESURRECTED THIS WIP

                    I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR FOREVER TO READ IT

                    TAG ME

                    or else

                    This lady thrives on the divine grace of Faith and the rich embrace of caffeine.

                    #197851
                    Esther
                    @esther-c
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                      Ok SO IT DID POST THE MOODBOARD

                      Wyoh was tricking me…I couldn’t see the moodboard until now 😑😂


                      @theducktator
                      @grcr @savannah_grace2009

                      Eeee! I’m so glad y’all are interested!! <33

                      Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

                      #197855
                      hybridlore
                      @hybridlore
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                        @esther-c

                        Yayyy!!! The moodboards look great!! 😊

                        "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.

                        #197857
                        Smiley
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                          @esther-c

                          ooooooooohhhh keep me tagged please 😄 I like the vibes of the boards and it sounds really fun!

                          I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.”
                          ‭‭Isaiah‬ ‭43‬:‭1‬

                          #197876
                          Keilah H.
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                            @esther-c cool!! I’ll totally read it, if only for fun! Might pick out a couple of grammar mistakes here and there or tell you if  there’s a better way for a sentence to flow, but other than that I don’t think I’ll be critiquing much.

                            "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                            #197899
                            TheShadow
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                              @esther-c

                              Please tag me for when you post the chapters, your boards look so good!!

                              “Our house is full of ducks!!!!”

                              #197902
                              The Ducktator
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                                @esther-c

                                *gasp* Hallie’s board has an Ender’s Game quote! I love Ender’s Game!

                                Any salad can be a Caesar salad if you stab it hard enough.

                                #197906
                                Esther
                                @esther-c
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                                  @hybridlore

                                  Thanks!!! ☺️


                                  @smiley
                                  @keilah-h @theshadow

                                  Thank you ladies! Sure thing!!


                                  @theducktator

                                  Wait really?? Oh I didn’t even notice! Maybe I’ll have to read the book now 😝

                                  Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

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