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February 16, 2025 at 5:42 pm #197817
Hey everyone!! So my lovely beta-reader ( @hybridlore ) was so awesome in giving me feedback on the first draft of an older WIP (this was the one I had asked for help with a little while back). I’m planning to start digging into the editing phase this week and hopefully have the second draft finished sometime in March (we’ll see… sometimes life decides to get in the way 😜)
I’ll be sharing the chapters here as I edit them, so some weeks you may get a lot of chapters, and some not so many. I’m hoping that creating a topic for this will keep me on track and help me not procrastinate (I’m aiming for 3-5 chapters a week right now, but it could end up being more. I’m not sure yet how in depth this editing is going to look). I’mma tag a bunch of people, but by no means feel obligated!! I would love your feedback as you’re reading, but if you just want to read for fun, that’s totally fine too! Lmk if you want to be tagged for chapters! (i don’t want you to have to subscribe and then get all the other posts that you might not care about, lol)
@theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009 @freed_and_redeemed @mineralizedwritings @stephie @theshadow @grcr @traiblazer @lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @the_lost-journal @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @smiley @anybodyyy!Here’s the moodboard for the book as a whole (I’m still not 100% satisfied, so I may eventually share a new one. I feel like this one has more vibes rather than like quotes that hint at the theme…idk. XD)
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Esther.
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
February 16, 2025 at 5:43 pm #197819Then moodboard for Hallie, MC 1
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
February 16, 2025 at 5:43 pm #197820And Easton…
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
February 16, 2025 at 5:45 pm #197821Brooooo
Ok, KP is glitching really bad for me rn. I’ll try to post his moodboard later. You will just have to wait in suspense 😈🤪
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
February 16, 2025 at 5:45 pm #197822Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
February 16, 2025 at 6:26 pm #197824Please tag me for chapters! I want the car on Easton’s board sooo bad, but in pink.
Any salad can be a Caesar salad if you stab it hard enough.
February 16, 2025 at 6:36 pm #197826Ooo love the boards! You can tag me too when you share the chapters! I’ll try my best to keep up! 😅😃
you're unique—just like everyone else.
i've got your nose.February 16, 2025 at 7:04 pm #197830@ESTHER-C
YESSS YOU RESURRECTED THIS WIPI HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR FOREVER TO READ IT
TAG ME
or else
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February 17, 2025 at 8:11 am #197851Ok SO IT DID POST THE MOODBOARD
Wyoh was tricking me…I couldn’t see the moodboard until now 😑😂
@theducktator @grcr @savannah_grace2009Eeee! I’m so glad y’all are interested!! <33
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
February 17, 2025 at 9:27 am #197855Yayyy!!! The moodboards look great!! 😊
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
February 17, 2025 at 11:37 am #197857ooooooooohhhh keep me tagged please 😄 I like the vibes of the boards and it sounds really fun!
I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.”
Isaiah 43:1February 17, 2025 at 1:42 pm #197876@esther-c cool!! I’ll totally read it, if only for fun! Might pick out a couple of grammar mistakes here and there or tell you if there’s a better way for a sentence to flow, but other than that I don’t think I’ll be critiquing much.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
February 17, 2025 at 7:02 pm #197899Please tag me for when you post the chapters, your boards look so good!!
“Our house is full of ducks!!!!”
February 17, 2025 at 7:17 pm #197902*gasp* Hallie’s board has an Ender’s Game quote! I love Ender’s Game!
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The Ducktator.
Any salad can be a Caesar salad if you stab it hard enough.
February 17, 2025 at 8:01 pm #197906Thanks!!! ☺️
Thank you ladies! Sure thing!!
Wait really?? Oh I didn’t even notice! Maybe I’ll have to read the book now 😝
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
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