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February 1, 2025 at 3:15 pm #196721
Ah…so her immortality is a curse…that makes it very interesting…
Have you ever heard of “Tuck Everlasting”? You might want to the storyline out for ideas since some of the characters in there are immortal…and problems occur because of that…I’ve never watched the film…I think there’s a book? But I know the storyline.
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February 1, 2025 at 3:17 pm #196722“If you combine a wolf and the letter “Z” you get the number 12″
What? How does that happen?
I love your new profile picture!!! Did you draw that?
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February 1, 2025 at 4:12 pm #196725No, I have never heard of “Tuck Everlasting”. But it is about immortality?
What? How does that happen?
Hee hee hee… go to google translate, translate it from English to German… then in the English box type “Twelve” just like that.
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February 1, 2025 at 4:15 pm #196726Oh my gosh!!!!😂 It’s actually true! How did you find that out?
Yes…the story is about an immortal family because they drank this special water…a girl meets one of the brothers and they fall in love. But, she’s not sure about marrying him because he’s immortal…you can look the whole story up.
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February 1, 2025 at 4:28 pm #196728I take German! I invented the quote myself! 😂
Yes…the story is about an immortal family because they drank this special water…a girl meets one of the brothers and they fall in love. But, she’s not sure about marrying him because he’s immortal…you can look the whole story up.
Interesting! And I was planing on something like that happening. But I will make sure to check it out!
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February 2, 2025 at 5:19 pm #196757Ooh, this is cool. Are you still working on your other WIP?
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February 3, 2025 at 12:51 pm #196822I love your new profile picture!!! Did you draw that?
Thank you!
No, I did not draw this one. It’s from a comic strip called ‘Customer Service Wolf’ that I recently discovered. As someone who works in retail, I found it relatable and funny.
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February 3, 2025 at 12:56 pm #196823I have already started working on her origin! I was thinking maybe that she had a test or a choice that was like a choice from God, and she was given the curse of immortality or something like that! An example was she was given the three choices between riches, wisdom, and immortality (Because those are the three things almost every human wants.) and the only correct option would be wisdom, but she foolishly chose immortality.
Ah, okay.
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February 3, 2025 at 1:14 pm #196828February 3, 2025 at 2:27 pm #196837I looked it up. The wolf is adorable! But, does he have a name?
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February 3, 2025 at 7:59 pm #196869I take German! I invented the quote myself! 😂
Neat! I wanted to learn German for a while…and still do.
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February 4, 2025 at 12:40 pm #196975I looked it up. The wolf is adorable! But, does he have a name?
Not that I am aware of. We can just call him Phil.
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