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    Linus Smallprint
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      @stephie

      Sorry I am late to reply.

      Thank you for offering to help. However, would you mind waiting until I start posting chapters? I have a few people helping me with this already and I am hoping some people who are reading the draft I will be posting on here will not know what is happening in the story yet. Hopefully, it won’t be too long before I start posting chapters. Thank you!

      Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

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      Linus Smallprint
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        @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @theducktator

        I threw together a 9-point outline for Martha as well, since she will be a major point of view character in this book as well. It’s not quite complete, such as I’m not really sure what to do for her amplified pressure. But here is what I have so far:

        https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pPdo2ZDjWhg9zeia1TtqsI0ZoLBqmTD8XNjJfoxkG4c/edit?usp=sharing

        It’s after Alan’s in this.

        Once I am more confident with this, I think I will start throwing together the final outline.

        What are your thoughts? How well does this fit with Alan’s arc (does it add to or take away)?

        Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

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        whaley
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          @linus-smallprint

          I’m going to try and look at all of this when possible.

          "If I don't like something, it's probably sanctification. Ugh." -E.C.S.

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          Stepheroni and Cheese
          @stephie
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            @linus-smallprint

            Yay, KP finally let me log in! XD

            However, would you mind waiting until I start posting chapters?

            I don’t mind at all 🙂

            Pray, thou shalt simply add ketchup unto the mac'n'cheese.

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