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    TheShadow
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      Hello, how are you all? Nice Thursday isn’t it (well, the weathers not great here but that’s okay).

      Here, I will be posting chapters for my new WIP, The Woods of Rosen. I’ll  probably post the first chapter tomorrow once it has been thoroughly cleaned up, and please feel free to critique anything from it. If you don’t like something in it, something doesn’t make sense, or anything else you notice about it, please let me know.
      The general plot of the story is that the townsfolk in Rosen, an isolated town surrounded by a forest, go missing, and two twins and three of their questionable allies are searching for them in the woods.

      Anyway, tags (feel free not to respond though if you don’t want to): @rae @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @loopylin @whaley @raxforge @theducktator @keilah-h @anyone else

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      “Our house is full of ducks!!!!”

      #197385
      Ellette Giselle
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        @whalekeeper

        Up above.

        Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

        #197386
        Ellette Giselle
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          @theshadow

          sounds interesting!

          Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

          #197392
          TheShadow
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            @ellette-giselle

            Whoops, thanks for catching the tag lol. Also thanks!

            “Our house is full of ducks!!!!”

            #197397
            Ellette Giselle
            @ellette-giselle
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              @theshadow

              Yep!!

              Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

              #197399
              Kefa
              @the_lost-journal
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                @theshadow

                Yay, now I get to stalk my sis’ book! I mean… hello stranger I don’t know, I will also be critiquing it too!

                "MAMA! I AM SCARED MOMA! MOMAAAAAA!!!!!!! TALK TO ME MAMA!"

                #197403
                hybridlore
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                  @theshadow

                  Yayy!! It sounds interesting—a little creepy, perhaps, but I’m intrigued!

                  'Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.'

                  #197404
                  Kefa
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                    @hybridlore

                    I think me and shadow are the only people on here who write anything creepy… 😂

                     

                    "MAMA! I AM SCARED MOMA! MOMAAAAAA!!!!!!! TALK TO ME MAMA!"

                    #197407
                    hybridlore
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                      @the_lost-journal

                      Really, lol. Hmm… I feel like other people do, too, but I’m not sure because I haven’t read too many people’s writing. But you’re right, most of us don’t for the most part.

                      Also, random question. What made you choose the name Kefa? (You don’t have to answer if you don’t want to.)

                      'Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.'

                      #197417
                      Kefa
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                        @hybridlore

                        I don’t think so…  Most people on here write historical fiction, fantasy, love…? or stuff like that.

                        Also, random question. What made you choose the name Kefa? (You don’t have to answer if you don’t want to.)

                        🤨 … what? …????

                        Uh, … that is my name????

                        "MAMA! I AM SCARED MOMA! MOMAAAAAA!!!!!!! TALK TO ME MAMA!"

                        #197420
                        The Most Esteemed Feathered One
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                          @the_lost-journal

                          I think me and shadow are the only people on here who write anything creepy… 😂

                          I don’t know…I started a pretty creepy story in my school notebook a couple weeks ago.

                          So long, and thanks for all the fish!

                          #197421
                          Kefa
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                            @theducktator

                            I don’t know…I started a pretty creepy story in my school notebook a couple weeks ago.

                            Hm, but do you frequently write horror?

                             

                            "MAMA! I AM SCARED MOMA! MOMAAAAAA!!!!!!! TALK TO ME MAMA!"

                            #197422
                            The Most Esteemed Feathered One
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                              @the_lost-journal

                              No. I think you two are probably the only ones who write creepy stuff regularly.

                              So long, and thanks for all the fish!

                              #197424
                              Kefa
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                                @theducktator

                                🤷‍♂️

                                Also, 👽☠️💀👾🤖🎃👹👺🤡

                                Also, what do you think of creepy things?

                                 

                                "MAMA! I AM SCARED MOMA! MOMAAAAAA!!!!!!! TALK TO ME MAMA!"

                                #197432
                                hybridlore
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                                  @the_lost-journal

                                  Oh, cool. I meant you didn’t have to answer if you didn’t want to because some people don’t share their names on here, and I didn’t know if it was your real name.

                                  A lot of times people pick fake names or usernames on here for internet safety. Like Rae and Loopy. Obviously Hybridlore isn’t my real name xD

                                  'Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.'

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