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February 6, 2025 at 7:15 pm #197382
Hello, how are you all? Nice Thursday isn’t it (well, the weathers not great here but that’s okay).
Here, I will be posting chapters for my new WIP, The Woods of Rosen. I’ll probably post the first chapter tomorrow once it has been thoroughly cleaned up, and please feel free to critique anything from it. If you don’t like something in it, something doesn’t make sense, or anything else you notice about it, please let me know.
The general plot of the story is that the townsfolk in Rosen, an isolated town surrounded by a forest, go missing, and two twins and three of their questionable allies are searching for them in the woods.Anyway, tags (feel free not to respond though if you don’t want to): @rae @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @loopylin @whaley @raxforge @theducktator @keilah-h @anyone else
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“Our house is full of ducks!!!!”
February 6, 2025 at 7:20 pm #197385Up above.
“Light lasts forever. Darkness lasts not even for one second, when you turn on the light.”
February 6, 2025 at 7:20 pm #197386sounds interesting!
“Light lasts forever. Darkness lasts not even for one second, when you turn on the light.”
February 6, 2025 at 10:11 pm #197392Whoops, thanks for catching the tag lol. Also thanks!
“Our house is full of ducks!!!!”
February 7, 2025 at 7:16 am #197397Yep!!
“Light lasts forever. Darkness lasts not even for one second, when you turn on the light.”
February 7, 2025 at 8:39 am #197399Yay, now I get to stalk my sis’ book! I mean… hello stranger I don’t know, I will also be critiquing it too!
Moral of the story, "always listen to a carrot cake when it screams at you."
February 7, 2025 at 10:51 am #197403Yayy!! It sounds interesting—a little creepy, perhaps, but I’m intrigued!
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
February 7, 2025 at 10:57 am #197404I think me and shadow are the only people on here who write anything creepy… 😂
Moral of the story, "always listen to a carrot cake when it screams at you."
February 7, 2025 at 11:06 am #197407Really, lol. Hmm… I feel like other people do, too, but I’m not sure because I haven’t read too many people’s writing. But you’re right, most of us don’t for the most part.
Also, random question. What made you choose the name Kefa? (You don’t have to answer if you don’t want to.)
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
February 7, 2025 at 11:51 am #197417I don’t think so… Most people on here write historical fiction, fantasy, love…? or stuff like that.
Also, random question. What made you choose the name Kefa? (You don’t have to answer if you don’t want to.)
🤨 … what? …????
Uh, … that is my name????
Moral of the story, "always listen to a carrot cake when it screams at you."
February 7, 2025 at 12:00 pm #197420I think me and shadow are the only people on here who write anything creepy… 😂
I don’t know…I started a pretty creepy story in my school notebook a couple weeks ago.
MARCIE! YOU MADE EGG SOUP!
February 7, 2025 at 12:01 pm #197421I don’t know…I started a pretty creepy story in my school notebook a couple weeks ago.
Hm, but do you frequently write horror?
Moral of the story, "always listen to a carrot cake when it screams at you."
February 7, 2025 at 12:07 pm #197422No. I think you two are probably the only ones who write creepy stuff regularly.
MARCIE! YOU MADE EGG SOUP!
February 7, 2025 at 12:11 pm #197424🤷♂️
Also, 👽☠️💀👾🤖🎃👹👺🤡
Also, what do you think of creepy things?
Moral of the story, "always listen to a carrot cake when it screams at you."
February 7, 2025 at 12:37 pm #197432Oh, cool. I meant you didn’t have to answer if you didn’t want to because some people don’t share their names on here, and I didn’t know if it was your real name.
A lot of times people pick fake names or usernames on here for internet safety. Like Rae and Loopy. Obviously Hybridlore isn’t my real name xD
"Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.
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