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Should I tag some people!? I guess so. ^^^^^^
@keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @theducktator @grcr @linus-smallprint @raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonashello, hybrid lore told me to tag people if I wanted them to give feedback over my stuff, so if you guys wouldn’t mind, could you judge my story? Thanks! 😅
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"MAMA! I AM SCARED MOMA! MOMAAAAAA!!!!!!! TALK TO ME MAMA!"
Super creepy, but interesting! Is this the entirety of the story, or is there going to be more? Either way, the mystery remains effective: if there’s more, than this is effective for piquing the reader’s interesting; if not, the questions it leaves unanswered are intriguing in and of themselves. I also liked your use of repetition.
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Security logs
Hallucinations
Friendly face
and two other
But I heard it does connect to the other stories. So the questions will be answered! But in some of the other stories!
. I also liked your use of repetition.
Thank you! The point of the story is Joey is seeing this banshee, but everyone around him thinks he is insane, but he keeps saying to himself that it is real.
"MAMA! I AM SCARED MOMA! MOMAAAAAA!!!!!!! TALK TO ME MAMA!"
Sorry I took a while to get back to you.
Of the projects you shared, The Kingdom of Kaimor sounds the most interesting to me. (Like Keilah, I like animal-hybrid races) Horror/Thrillars aren’t my thing, so A Cellar’s tales and P.I.-C.A.F.E are probably the least appealing. I did read that bit of A Cellar’s tales that you shared though. It was fine so far, I didn’t find it too creepy and more mysterious. It might be a little too quickly paced.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
Thanks for getting back! I will try to make it slower! 😁
and I will only share the other projects!
"MAMA! I AM SCARED MOMA! MOMAAAAAA!!!!!!! TALK TO ME MAMA!"
You’re welcome!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
Sorry I’m late in getting back to you.
Yeah, that was a creepy story. I don’t have too much to say about it—I agree with Linus about the pacing. I, too, like your use of repetition here. 😊
in my reached up to my ears, to feel them blood… leaking out of them…
I think I get what you’re saying here, but I had a bit of a hard time understanding this…??
I don’t like to read horror either, though. I’d love to read your other works if you post scenes, but I’d prefer not to be tagged for the scarier stuff. 😅 Sorry…
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junior, double, triple whopperoop huge typo 😂 I forgot to type a lot of stuff 😂😂
Thanks!
"MAMA! I AM SCARED MOMA! MOMAAAAAA!!!!!!! TALK TO ME MAMA!"
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