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@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 19 out!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 20 out!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 21 out! Not too happy with this one. I’ve discovered I don’t like to write fight scenes.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 22 out!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 23!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 24!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 25 out!
I don’t think I want this to be James. This is too similar to Eric. Both characters feel unappreciated, and grow depressed because they don’t fit in and feel. The only thing different is James has hope in The Saviour so he’s less self centered and is more outgoing. But I can see Eric going through this exact same thing if he was one of The Faithful. He would probably even say the exact same things. I’ll see what you think and if you have any ideas on how to fix it. But honestly, try to picture a saved version of Eric doing this.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 26 out!
I feel like the quality of these recent chapters hasn’t been as good, and I’m loosing steam. But I need to remeber that this is just the first draft. Fell free to provide… motivation to get me to keep going until then end. (Interoperate that how you will. I know, it’s risky saying that.)
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
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