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April 9, 2025 at 10:45 am #201368
Give me one second, and I will share with you a document showing you how to do this.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
April 9, 2025 at 10:46 am #201369Oooo! Awesome!
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
April 9, 2025 at 11:03 am #201372Here you go: https://drive.proton.me/urls/7FTVZ5ZDVR#qZ3ixOGvq1e0
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
April 9, 2025 at 11:04 am #201373Whoops! Accidentally tagged myself instead of you
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
April 9, 2025 at 11:13 am #201377Ahhhhh! I never saw the stripe one! SO CUTE! and I love the climbing one! is that for the book?
Okay, back to topic.
Thanks so much. I think I could figure this out. (Possibly.) After some trial and error I’m sure I’ll get it. Thanks!
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
April 9, 2025 at 11:16 am #201379Stripe with the girl hugging him? Didn’t you see that one? Or are you referring to the generic Kunulf with the crossbow?
The climbing one was for an essay I write about a year ago on whether or not it is okay for Christians to write fiction. I wanted to have it published on here, which is why I joined this site, but the Kingdom Pen team never got back to me.
Your welcome for the help! Let me know if you get stuck.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
April 9, 2025 at 11:18 am #201380Nope, ever saw the hugging one. (That I remember…..) I think I just saw the outline.
Yeah, KP team hasn’t gotten back to me on any of my stuff either. I think They’re kinda gone. (which may mean that we won’t get kicked off when we age out after all. 🤫)
Thanks! I will.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
April 9, 2025 at 1:12 pm #201387@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 15 is out gang!
I think I need to rethink this chapter a little. I have no intensive to take James side in here, it just seems like he is being irrational for no reason. I also really need to work on Sara. She has zero character development because I’ve only just thrown her in.
But things are about to get more interesting.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
April 9, 2025 at 10:50 pm #201405I’m having difficulty with Proton. Do I have to download something to read it? It took me to a folder with chapters, but each individual chapter won’t open when I click it.
A friend told me that teaching me how to use tech was like teaching his grandma, and unfortunately, he’s probably right.
To err is human; to arr is pirate.
April 9, 2025 at 10:58 pm #201406Nevermind, I double clicked and that worked.
To err is human; to arr is pirate.
April 10, 2025 at 12:50 pm #201446@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 16 out. I put it both on Proton and Google
The second part of this chapter was probably one of the hardest to write so far. I felt just as awkward writing this as Alan felt in it. I think the book needs a scene like this though at this point, so I pressed. I’ll see what you all think.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
April 11, 2025 at 4:02 pm #201602@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 17 out!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
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