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March 24, 2025 at 1:12 pm #200659
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapters 5 and 6 are out!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
March 27, 2025 at 3:13 pm #200808@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 8 out now!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
March 29, 2025 at 11:16 am #200848@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter the 9th out now!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
April 1, 2025 at 12:42 pm #200978@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter the 10th out now!
I know. I know. I may have ruined the whole book for you. You will by no doubt recognize what it is. I tried to disguise it, and add in some extra things, but those attempts to hide it were in vain. If you haven’t heard of it before, then I’ve corrupted you and ruined your life. I know some kids might read this book, and I’m doing a bad job of protecting them. But, you see, I had to put it in there. I couldn’t help myself. I’ll understand if you put the book down because you will now be expecting it to be in every chapter. Every sentence. And now that it’s in there, it is in there to stay.
The greatest game of all time. The Game. (Which you just lost).
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
April 1, 2025 at 12:43 pm #200979Happy April Fools!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
April 1, 2025 at 12:46 pm #200981@linus-smallprint what is “The Game”???? LOL
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
April 1, 2025 at 12:48 pm #200983The Game is The Game where you don’t think about The Game. If you think about The Game, you have lost it. So, by getting me to explain The Game, you made me lose it, and now you have lost it again.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
April 1, 2025 at 12:49 pm #200984OHHHH
I SEE
wait they have rickrolls in Ehverwyld?
they should, at least some equivalent
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
April 1, 2025 at 12:50 pm #200985@linus-smallprint But you’ve lost The Game by telling me about it, so there’s really no winner here.
lol
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
April 1, 2025 at 12:53 pm #200987Apparently, you do not understand The Game.
No one wins The Game. Everyone who plays it has lost it at least once. But now that you have heard about it, you have no choice but to play it.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Game_(mind_game)
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
April 1, 2025 at 12:56 pm #200988ehhh I’ll probably forget about it in two days anyway. The buck stops with me.
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
April 1, 2025 at 1:25 pm #200992Criky
That sounds ominous.
“Light lasts forever. Darkness lasts not even for one second, when you turn on the light.”
April 1, 2025 at 1:32 pm #200994Darn it, I lost The Game again
The exhaustion is strong with this one
April 1, 2025 at 8:04 pm #201032*squints at post*
*clicks on link*
Well, according to wikipedia, whether I lost is up to interpretation.
Pray, thou shalt simply add ketchup unto the mac'n'cheese.
April 1, 2025 at 8:46 pm #201033 -
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