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    Linus Smallprint
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      @whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

      Chapters 5 and 6 are out!

      Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

      #200808
      Linus Smallprint
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        @whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

        Chapter 8 out now!

        Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

        #200848
        Linus Smallprint
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          @whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

          Chapter the 9th out now!

          Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

          #200978
          Linus Smallprint
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            @whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

            Chapter the 10th out now!

            I know. I know. I may have ruined the whole book for you.  You will by no doubt recognize what it is. I tried to disguise it, and add in some extra things, but those attempts to hide it were in vain. If you haven’t heard of it before, then I’ve corrupted you and ruined your life. I know some kids might read this book, and I’m doing a bad job of protecting them. But, you see, I had to put it in there. I couldn’t help myself.  I’ll understand if you put the book down because you will now be expecting it to be in every chapter. Every sentence. And now that it’s in there, it is in there to stay.

            The greatest game of all time. The Game. (Which you just lost).

            Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

            #200979
            Linus Smallprint
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              Happy April Fools!

              Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

              #200981
              Keilah H.
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                @linus-smallprint what is “The Game”???? LOL

                "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                #200983
                Linus Smallprint
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                  @keilah-h

                  The Game is The Game where you don’t think about The Game. If you think about The Game, you have lost it. So, by getting me to explain The Game, you made me lose it, and now you have lost it again.

                  Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

                  #200984
                  Keilah H.
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                    OHHHH

                    I SEE

                     

                     

                    wait they have rickrolls in Ehverwyld?

                     

                    they should, at least some equivalent

                    "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                    #200985
                    Keilah H.
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                      @linus-smallprint But you’ve lost The Game by telling me about it, so there’s really no winner here.

                       

                      lol

                      "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                      #200987
                      Linus Smallprint
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                        @keilah-h

                        Apparently, you do not understand The Game.

                        No one wins The Game. Everyone who plays it has lost it at least once. But now that you have heard about it, you have no choice but to play it.

                        https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Game_(mind_game)

                        Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.

                        #200988
                        Keilah H.
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                          @linus-smallprint lol

                           

                           

                          ehhh I’ll probably forget about it in two days anyway. The buck stops with me.

                          "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

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                          Ellette Giselle
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                            @linus-smallprint

                            Criky

                            That sounds ominous.

                            “Light lasts forever. Darkness lasts not even for one second, when you turn on the light.”

                            #200994
                            whaley
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                              Darn it, I lost The Game again

                              The exhaustion is strong with this one

                              #201032
                              Stepheroni and Cheese
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                                @linus-smallprint

                                *squints at post*

                                *clicks on link*

                                Well, according to wikipedia, whether I lost is up to interpretation.

                                Pray, thou shalt simply add ketchup unto the mac'n'cheese.

                                #201033
                                The Ducktator
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                                  @linus-smallprint

                                  *visible confusion*

                                  MARCIE! YOU MADE EGG SOUP!

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