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  • #41254
    Hannah
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      @shannon hmmm, well how’s this thought. I’m trying to give the back story all threw out the series. What’s your thought’s on that?

      ~I don’t know what I’m doing~

      #41258
      Anonymous
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        Ok, that make sense…the only thing that I would say is that it is a little difficult to understand how all the stories fit together. I think one post to just kinda tell what is going on might help. Writing out a list of questions readers might have could be helpful.
        I get what you are trying to do, and that would work too. I’m just telling you what I would do if I were you. 😉 Hope this is helpful!

        #41259
        Anonymous
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          @salome01W4G See above : )

          #41261
          Hannah
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            @shannon yes it is helpful I will probably do that I just wanted to see what you thought about my first idea, Man I’ve gotten so much constructive feed back, I’m really excited. (well my grandad asked if I was doing okay mentally… he thought they were to dark… :/ 🙁 but my grandma and aunts asked if I had plagiarized they thought it was so good. 😀 XD )

            ~I don’t know what I’m doing~

            #41895
            Hannah
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              My week has been a whirlwind and writing time was limited but some how I managed to pull off writing a back story for my short story series.

              https://regeneratelifefarm.blogspot.com/2017/08/the-outcasts-reborn-short-story.html


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              #43591
              Hannah
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                @catwing @dragon-snapper @emily @shannon @his-instrument @daeus @ck4always @winter-rose

                I’m tagging people I’ve previously shared stories with so if you don’t want to be tagged lemme know!
                Anyways my 5th short story (finally) went live I will tell you I had REALLY bad writer’s block this time around.

                https://regeneratelifefarm.blogspot.com/2017/09/mercy-house-short-story-5.html

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                #43639
                Anonymous
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                  @salome01w4g Nice one! I think that might be the best you’ve written yet. I don’t really need to be tagged because I am subscribed to your blog and get emails for the new posts.

                  #43662
                  Hannah
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                    @emily okay! Really? I’m glad you liked it!! 😀 🙂 I thought it was more eh, it was harder to write than the other ones.

                    ~I don’t know what I’m doing~

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