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August 19, 2017 at 5:55 pm #41254
@shannon hmmm, well how’s this thought. I’m trying to give the back story all threw out the series. What’s your thought’s on that?
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August 19, 2017 at 6:10 pm #41258Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ok, that make sense…the only thing that I would say is that it is a little difficult to understand how all the stories fit together. I think one post to just kinda tell what is going on might help. Writing out a list of questions readers might have could be helpful.
I get what you are trying to do, and that would work too. I’m just telling you what I would do if I were you. 😉 Hope this is helpful!August 19, 2017 at 6:10 pm #41259Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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@salome01W4G See above : )
August 19, 2017 at 6:29 pm #41261@shannon yes it is helpful I will probably do that I just wanted to see what you thought about my first idea, Man I’ve gotten so much constructive feed back, I’m really excited. (well my grandad asked if I was doing okay mentally… he thought they were to dark… :/ 🙁 but my grandma and aunts asked if I had plagiarized they thought it was so good. 😀 XD )
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August 26, 2017 at 11:51 am #41895My week has been a whirlwind and writing time was limited but some how I managed to pull off writing a back story for my short story series.
https://regeneratelifefarm.blogspot.com/2017/08/the-outcasts-reborn-short-story.html
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September 17, 2017 at 10:34 pm #43591@catwing @dragon-snapper @emily @shannon @his-instrument @daeus @ck4always @winter-rose
I’m tagging people I’ve previously shared stories with so if you don’t want to be tagged lemme know!
Anyways my 5th short story (finally) went live I will tell you I had REALLY bad writer’s block this time around.https://regeneratelifefarm.blogspot.com/2017/09/mercy-house-short-story-5.html
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September 18, 2017 at 12:11 pm #43639Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@salome01w4g Nice one! I think that might be the best you’ve written yet. I don’t really need to be tagged because I am subscribed to your blog and get emails for the new posts.
September 18, 2017 at 1:14 pm #43662@emily okay! Really? I’m glad you liked it!! 😀 🙂 I thought it was more eh, it was harder to write than the other ones.
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