The Master’s Servants : Allegorical short stories

[Hannah]

@catwing @dragon-snapper @emily @shannon @his-instrument @daeus @ck4always
I have my 2nd short story live! (Capture)
https://regeneratelifefarm.blogspot.com/2017/08/capture.html

So after “talking” with @emily yesterday I decided to turn my story into a series of allegorical short stories (The Master’s Servants). But my question now is, should I keep linking it (Since more people like my family and friends can see it) or post the stories directly here or both?
Blessings!

• This topic was modified 7 years, 4 months ago by Hannah.
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~I don’t know what I’m doing~

[Anonymous]

@salome01w4g That is such a great story! You did a wonderful job! I think I am liking the stories as they are in 1st person, to respond to your question. Since 2nd person is hardly ever used, I think that it might be a little confusing for the reader. Also, it would make it a lot more difficult to write. Those are just my thoughts.
I don’t think that it is a problem for you to keep linking it. But posting it would probably be fine too. Just do whatever is simpler for you.

[Hannah]

@emily
I’m sooo glad you like it!! Yeah I tried to write Capture in 2nd person and I had to re-write it like 3 times because it was way harder and wasn’t as good. I guess I just keep linking it since it is easier for me to do. Thanks for your thoughts! 😀 🙂

~I don’t know what I’m doing~

[Anonymous]

@salome01w4g Any time.

[Anonymous]

Great stories @salome01w4g! I love the imagery and feeling.

[Hannah]

@shannon Thank you! 🙂 Glad you like it! 😀

~I don’t know what I’m doing~

[Hannah]

Story 3 is live https://regeneratelifefarm.blogspot.com/2017/08/a-walk-with-master.html

I feel like this one is rougher and not as good as the first two… any thoughts??

@catwing @dragon-snapper @emily @shannon @his-instrument @daeus @ck4always @winter-rose

~I don’t know what I’m doing~

[Anonymous]

That is a good story @salome01w4g! 😀 I feel like you could maybe spend a little more time on the stories in the future and it might help. That’s just what I think, though 🙂

[Hannah]

@emily yeah, my “secret” is working in a dark, very quiet room, all alone and I didn’t for this last one. Maybe trying to do one a week instead of one a day would work better. Thank you! To have an audience however small helps me work more seriously, and try to make it more interesting, deep, meaningful, etc… 🙂

~I don’t know what I’m doing~

[Anonymous]

Hmm @salome01w4g. That is interesting. Yeah, I totally get the audience thing 😉

[CK4always]

@Hannah So sorry I wasn’t here!!! I’ve been really busy with a LOT of stuff!!! I’ll try to keep up tho 🙂

[CK4always]

I read it…. looks cool! 😀 I enjoyed it 🙂

[Hannah]

@CK4always glad ya liked it.

~I don’t know what I’m doing~

[CK4always]

@Hannah of course 🙂

[Anonymous]

Good story @salome01W4G! I think that maybe it would help me a little if you wrote a back story. The stories are great, but I think that a back story would help it to make more sense.

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