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April 11, 2017 at 11:33 am #30003
@dragonsnapper I just read this, it is hilarious! You must do more! I think my favorite part is the ending, it couldn’t have ended any better.
I LOVED the roles you put every one in, hahaha! It was so great!
Kudos to you!The Scattered Writer
April 11, 2017 at 11:35 am #30005@dragon-snapper Oh my goodness! I didn’t read this all the way through until just now, but this is awesome! My favorite part was: “Her fist was stuck midair, and she thought back to every book she had read before. Great. Now she was living a clichΓ©.”
Thanks so much for sharing! I am eagerly awaiting the sequel! πApril 11, 2017 at 11:38 am #30006@ethryndal Mayhap. π Btw, does anyone know of any really good ENFJ villains? I’ve been wanting to find a great ENFJ villain. (@kate-flournouy?)
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April 11, 2017 at 11:43 am #30007@daeus Hmmm…the only ENFJs I know are you and myself…
@delightinlife Yay! Yes, that ‘cliche’ I think is so funny, because although true, and although I’ve used it myself, it may well have been used by every author out there. π
@jenali π Thanks so much!β β β ENFP β β β
April 11, 2017 at 11:46 am #30008@dragon-snapper By the way, I keep seeing ENFJ or other letters mentioned. Is that from a personality test? If so, which one? (I’m just curious) Thanks! π
April 11, 2017 at 11:49 am #30010@delightinlife Yes. https://www.16personalities.com
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April 11, 2017 at 11:49 am #30011@delightinlife *cough* Yes…it is from the 16personalities test. That’s the name of the site. Personally, I hardly understand any of it, nor have I taken much time to, but @kate-flournoy and a few others love it. I am ENFJ, which is protagonist…whatever that means. π
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April 11, 2017 at 12:06 pm #30014@Daeus wellll… I have an ENFJ anti-hero but he’s not written yet, so… XD
*ahem*
Yes. Let me think.
Hmmmm… *scratches head* You guys aren’t natural villain material.:P The only one I can think of straight off the top of my head is Mr. Waternoose, from Monsters Inc, and then it’s close between ENFJ and ENTJ.
Also… hm. *dredges through the depths of her mental villain archives* I’m getting several ENFPs and wayyyy too many INFPs to be comfortable with, but it seems that ENFJ villains are very scarce. I’ll let you know if I come up with any others.
You should write one. πApril 11, 2017 at 12:10 pm #30015Not natural villain material! But @kate-flournoy ! I can be a villain…see, watch.
Eearrgh *pulls out foam pirate sword*β β β ENFP β β β
April 11, 2017 at 12:12 pm #30016@Dragon-Snapper *chokes* I am mortally afeared. XD
April 11, 2017 at 12:15 pm #30017@Daeus @Kate-Flournoy @Dragon-Snapper In all my MBTI experience, Hans from Frozen seems to present a shining example of an ENFJ villain. Please don’t kill me.
*is probably geeking out about something*
April 11, 2017 at 12:18 pm #30019@GracieGirl oooh, actually you know what? You’re right. Good example.
April 11, 2017 at 12:26 pm #30022@Kate-Flournoy I actually stole that idea from an article I read a couple weeks ago. I’m inclined to agree with most of the author’s assumptions, but I’ve never read the Phantom of the Opera so I can’t testify to him being an INFP. πhttp://www.psychologyjunkie.com/2016/02/01/the-greatest-villains-of-every-myers-briggs-type-the-idealists/
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April 11, 2017 at 12:26 pm #30023Yeah, I’ll have to figure the link thing out eventually. π
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April 11, 2017 at 12:28 pm #30024@GracieGirl ha! π I haven’t read it either. INFP villains do seem to be remarkably prevalent though. It’s scary actually, but since I’ve started looking I’ve found more INFP villains than I have heroes. ;P
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