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April 7, 2017 at 9:27 pm #29731
@dragon-snapper Sequel!!
And about @daeus suggestion, there are heaps of Aussies on here – maybe they have their own “exclusive” circle of knights, or a bunch of rebels that they encounter or something *shrugs* Just throwing stuff out there π Can’t wait to see what you come up with!
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April 7, 2017 at 10:37 pm #29743βYou only ever show up to tell me things I donβt want to hear!β
This has got to be my new motto. xD Nicely done. I laughed while reading it.
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April 8, 2017 at 1:41 am #29745@Dragon-snapper Oh goodness. XD I’m going to be faaaamous. *dies of laughter*
@Daeus has an interesting idea though. π Also, I’m curious to know how you’d view a stereotypical Australian… xPWriting Heroes β¦ Writing Hope // janemareeauthor.com.au
April 8, 2017 at 6:24 am #29747@dragon-snapper Oh, oh, oh! You have to mention butterflies wielding timesabers at some point!
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April 8, 2017 at 8:27 am #29749@Dragon-Snapper and cookies. π
April 8, 2017 at 8:52 am #29750@dragon-snapper How ’bout some play off the Writer’s Corner? Armor Polishing Corner….? ‘Hey, I’ll be here for about half an hour. I need to get my helmet and shin guards done.’ XD Olay, that’s not a very good example, but you get the idea. π
And if you’re not drowning in characteristic quirks yet, there’s always my Zikers thing. Oh, and I just thought of another really small one. My introduction thread thingy was called ‘Hi-ya! *waves manically*’ Maybe I wave manically at some point if I’m there? ππ
Ah, man. This whole thread is making me laugh! Pure awesome.
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April 8, 2017 at 9:18 am #29755This is a test, because it is not posting my post. Weirdness.
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April 8, 2017 at 9:19 am #29756@graciegirl I love the idea of an Armor Corner! And I have to include Zikers and your waving manically.
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April 8, 2017 at 9:20 am #29758@kate-flournoy Maybe I should make a Treat Hall in the castle, where there are all sorts of treats. Cookies, cake, scones (with chocolate), ice cream, chocolate, and raspberries. π
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April 8, 2017 at 9:20 am #29760April 8, 2017 at 9:20 am #29761@daeus How do you feel about being held captive?
@jane-maree I’m not sure how I would either, actually. π Maybe I should give you a pet koala, and a kangaroo that takes you everywhere like a mighty steed.
@audrey-caylin Maybe the cliched mentor death is a really obvious fake death. π I love the idea!!!!!β β β ENFP β β β
April 8, 2017 at 9:21 am #29762@Dragon-Snapper yessssss. Do it. π
April 8, 2017 at 9:22 am #29763And everyone, my brain is bursting with ideas, so I might end up making a sequel for the sequel and a sequel for that sequel. π What do you think of that?
@emma-flournoy Concerning above paragraph, thank for that dare you gave me. π
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April 8, 2017 at 9:24 am #29764@Dragon-Snapper hey. You do whatever you want and I’m totally cool with that. π
April 8, 2017 at 9:25 am #29765@Kate-flournoy Heehee. Excellent.
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