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April 7, 2017 at 1:00 pm #29700
Maybe my obsession with psychology… or those of us who are devoted Kylo Ren fans as opposed to otherwise. :’D
April 7, 2017 at 1:00 pm #29701I think a dig at the unnecessary drama of the Twilight-style love triangle would be funny…
I just finished reading the series and any dig at the books would be welcome… *gags*Writer. Dreamer. Sometimes blogger. MBTI mess. Lover of Jesus and books.
April 7, 2017 at 1:04 pm #29703Oh, there are so many good things, I don’t know if it’s actually known on the forum yet but I am Sarah’s confetti apprentice. Also we need to incorporate Brianna slaughtering bad grammar wherever she goes. And dude, can there please be an awkward love triangle that never goes anywhere? Cause I think that would be funny.
Theater kid. Currently depressed because I can't stop listening to sad musicals.
April 7, 2017 at 1:12 pm #29704Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@dragon-snapper An evil mustache-twirling cat-petting villain.
April 7, 2017 at 1:17 pm #29705@christi-eaton @that_writer_girl_99 Oh man, I’ve never written a romance.
I’ve got Brianna covered with the bad grammar.
@winter-rose Priceless.
@kate-flournoy One MBTI all knowing character coming right up.You guys are awesome for inspiration.
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April 7, 2017 at 1:27 pm #29707@Dragon-Snapper *bows, flourishes cape* Awesome is after all our job description. XD
April 7, 2017 at 1:48 pm #29709@dragon-snapper A villain’s minions who are great shots. Also a petition to include @Michael-stanton as the evil overlord. And possibly give Josiah a brother who contradicts him at every turn and is obsessed with hair-styles (all kinds on everybody). XD
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April 7, 2017 at 1:50 pm #29710@dragon-snapper You can study the Meet the Staff page to see who’s on the KP team. XD The only person currently missing is our new web developer.
I pretty much always wear purple, my middle name is Storm, and my superhero name amongst the team is “Healer of the Broken,” just in case those are details worth noting. 😉
I second the vote for the inclusion of confetti. I think it would be interesting if Sarah were a farmer who cultivates a plant that produces confetti, and Christi helps her harvest it. 😛
April 7, 2017 at 2:01 pm #29714@dragon-snapper You should have someone who disappears in a cloud of glitter/pickles/or flames. I vote for a sequel too.
April 7, 2017 at 2:03 pm #29715@dragon-snapper Oh, one more suggestion: give me a sidekick that’s a squirrel. I have a friend who would appreciate it. 😉
April 7, 2017 at 6:12 pm #29723@theliterarycrusader Interesting request. I shall be done, my liege. On the point of confetti, I already have a name for the farm: KeePer Confetti Farms.
@jess I like the disappearing thing. Maybe that’s how Josiah disappears and appears so quickly.
@hope Haha! @michael-stanton If you read the previous story which this entire thread is about, you’ll understand this request. Would you like to be Thray’s second in command? If you don’t, and you’d rather be a Knight, there are many other troll things who wouldn’t mind the job either. 😛- This reply was modified 7 years, 7 months ago by Snapper.
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April 7, 2017 at 8:18 pm #29727@dragon-snapper I am actually very excited to see how this new short story turns out. 😀
Theater kid. Currently depressed because I can't stop listening to sad musicals.
April 7, 2017 at 8:28 pm #29728@dragon-snapper, @jane-maree should be a super stereotypical Australian with neat Aussie way of saying things.
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April 7, 2017 at 9:09 pm #29729@dragon-snapper I’m late in seeing this, but yes, definitely a sequel!
Well…I wouldn’t want anyone to have to die, but a cliched mentor death might be funny 😉
April 7, 2017 at 9:16 pm #29730@dragon-snapper oh, wait, have a fake death xD A really obvious one.
I’ll stop now before you’re overwhelmed with everyone’s ideas. I can’t wait for this new story!
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