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@dragon-snapper This… this is beautiful. Every golden word of it.
*jumps in an X-Wing and blows something up*
@cindygreen *bows*
☀ ☀ ☀ ENFP ☀ ☀ ☀
Lazy reader finally gets around to reading sequel. Reads Part 1. Runs off to get ice cream. Returns with Sparkling Apple Cider Float. Continues reading…finishes Float. Decides it is the best thing she’s ever tried in her entire life. Keeps reading…until the part about soy ice cream. Agrees, but is relieved that coconut milk ice cream is not mentioned since that is what she likes. Keeps reading…reads part where all non-dairy ice cream is described as terrible. Laughs evilly. More chocolate coconut bliss bars for her! Keeps reading…finishes. Gives a big thumbs up. 😀 Thanks, @dragon-snapper ! Not as funny as the last one, but maybe I was too full from my Float of Awesomeness to laugh much. 😉