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August 23, 2017 at 2:12 pm #41590
@daeus Well, if you can say Macdonalds in Japanese, I can say pizza in Russian. π
@kina-lamb I shall add those to the list. Thankee kindly. π
@catwing *is still shaking from your paw/talon handshake*
*steadies and brushes self off*
XD I’m glad you like it! π Have you read the sequel?β β β ENFP β β β
August 23, 2017 at 3:15 pm #41613WHAT SEQUEL! *start shaking @dragon-snapper again* TELL ME! WHERE IS IT?!
IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
August 23, 2017 at 3:18 pm #41619@catwing *wobbles and steadies self on imaginary wall* You know. The sequel on page 31 of this topic.
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August 23, 2017 at 3:21 pm #41623Thanks @dragon-snapper ! *hands you feathers* You have been most helpful. *runs off to find story…*
IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
August 23, 2017 at 3:50 pm #41629@dragon-snapper That was great! *trots off to do some actual writing*
IMMA KAPEEFER! Til we're old and gray!
August 23, 2017 at 5:18 pm #41634Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@dragon-snapper I didn’t realize there was a sequel either. π That is so great! I love ice cream, raspberries, chocolate, aaand, unfortunately, coffee. *runs away yelling as a storm of coffee-hater-KeePers attack* π
August 23, 2017 at 5:18 pm #41636Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@dragon-snapper hating instead of haters π
September 10, 2017 at 8:27 pm #43076I can’t believe I didn’t read this sooner. The things I miss when I’m not around. @dragon-snapper , this is so funny and awesome that words are failing me …I…like…the troll things. π πWORDLOSSTICS is the greatest. I can’t stop smiling. π
September 10, 2017 at 8:29 pm #43078Attack the coffee lover!!! @emily π
September 10, 2017 at 8:32 pm #43080I haven’t read the sequel yet, @dragon-snapper . Saving the funny, side-splittingness for the most boring part of tomorrow. I’ve had my fill of awesomeness for the day. π
September 11, 2017 at 2:25 pm #43092Loves it!!!
Nice job, @dragon-snapper !IF YOU WERE TO MAKE ANOTHER SEQUEL…….
Is there the slightest possibility I could cameo? I like dragons and chocolate and referencing all the things I am nerdy about (LotR, Star Wars, AiO, Princess Bride, and a bunch of other things we don’t need to mention) and SWORDS!!!
ENTP, Aether-borg Hero with cape obsession and fascination with swords.
https://forums.theaetherliSeptember 24, 2017 at 2:16 pm #45040@overcomer Wordlosstics exists ya’ll.
@aislinn-mollisong I’ll bear it in mind… Although, the plots for these can be nitpicky. It’s actually quite hard to get everything I want in there. But…I will try. πβ β β ENFP β β β
November 16, 2017 at 1:34 am #53465@dragon-snapper I am SO late, but this is awesome!! Ooh, can I be in the possible next story too? *Bambi eyes*
HAHAHA all those cliche jokes! I’m in stitches!
You can pronounce it however you want.
November 17, 2017 at 5:16 pm #53699@dekreel Yeah…so that’s our KP history. π
Well, if I write another. I don’t know why, but I have trouble with short stories.
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November 17, 2017 at 5:27 pm #53700@dragon-snapper It’s okay if you don’t write another one! That’s exactly what I meant too: If you write another one π
You can pronounce it however you want.
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