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May 8, 2017 at 3:48 am #32711
I thought he had a long beard, not a spiky beard?
May 8, 2017 at 8:15 am #32714@gideon-sowdon Aye, he did.
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May 8, 2017 at 10:33 am #32715Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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@Ethryndal Wow. That picture is awesome. 😀
May 8, 2017 at 11:22 am #32716@that_writer_girl_99 @aratrea Actualy, I am a Weird ‘E’. I am very outgoing with people I know, like you guys, but strangers freak me out and I clam up. And then there’s the really awkkward period where I kindd of know you so am talking to you but am still very quiet and reserved. I also like being by myself, and could probaby go for awhile like that, but I’d need peopleventually. I’m sort of a ‘introverted in spurts’ ENFP..
@gideon-sowdon Yes, I tink he was suppose d to have a long beard,but the picturee is too perfcet to change.Sorry for hte bad spelling, I’m tryingg to read a book at the smae time so I can get as much done as possile before my brother find sout I have it, cause it’s the last book of a serries we’re both reading. XD
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May 8, 2017 at 12:17 pm #32726@gideon-sowdon @dragon-snapper Oops. Um…I plead artistic license. 😀
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May 8, 2017 at 12:23 pm #32727@ethryndal YES! any possible way you can draw and post it in an hour so I can see it before I have to leave the library? *bats eyes prettily* (No internet at my house, a condition which has been woeful to me since I found this amazaterific place)
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May 8, 2017 at 12:26 pm #32732@anne-of-lothlorien *groans miserably and winces* Agh, I’m sorry, I have to leave for homeschool co-op in fifteen minutes, and there’s no way I can draw something that fast. *headdesk* I’m sorry. 🙁
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May 8, 2017 at 12:29 pm #32736*bravely draws in a trembling breath*
I shall… wait. I can. I can wait. Yes, I can. It’s possible. Isn’t it? I shall wait until Thursday, or possibly have to wait until… *gulps* next Monday.
*dissolves into a pool of regret, anticipation, and for some reason laughter*
*collects herself into a swirling mess of a figure*
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May 8, 2017 at 6:47 pm #32766@Daeus Oh, I knew she drew it, I just saw it colored in your version. Cool. Effects.
May 11, 2017 at 2:47 pm #33000@anne-of-lothlorien @Daeus I present to you…
King Daeus.
I’m sorry that your hand got messed up.
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May 11, 2017 at 2:51 pm #33003@ethryndal Ah! That is so funny!
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May 11, 2017 at 2:57 pm #33007Haha! Very good. 😀
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May 11, 2017 at 3:20 pm #33008Wonderful!
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May 11, 2017 at 4:43 pm #33017Love it!!!!!!!
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May 11, 2017 at 5:58 pm #33018Oh, my goodness these are the best three thread pages in the world.
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