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May 5, 2017 at 11:11 pm #32513
Please someone, anyone, I implore you on bended knee… draw Josiah the Wiser, sporting his scraggly coarse tarantula beard, with a frog (grinning evilly) on his head. Anyone who can draw, please try… if you need references, just look at his avatar, or watch the Stereotype videos
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By the way @daeus, I bless you forever and heap ice cream cones on you for compiling that list. That has been to helpful. Now go find some ice cream to go with the cones *smirks*ENFP - "One must be sane to think clearly, but one can think deeply and be quite insane."
May 5, 2017 at 11:12 pm #32514ENFP - "One must be sane to think clearly, but one can think deeply and be quite insane."
May 5, 2017 at 11:14 pm #32515Not sure what I’m supposed to think about this… 😛
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May 5, 2017 at 11:23 pm #32516That you should be appreciative that you\ have a bunch of knights that would love to laugh nicely at you and your frogs and raspberries. By the way, where did you get that raspberry @Aratrea
ENFP - "One must be sane to think clearly, but one can think deeply and be quite insane."
May 5, 2017 at 11:23 pm #32517@anne-of-lothlorien Probably the same place I got my “scraggly coarse tarantula beard.” 😛
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May 5, 2017 at 11:25 pm #32518@Aratrea I shall have to inquire this of @dragon-snapper… but for the moment, do you know any artists you believe could portray you in your ‘The Wiser’ form correctly? The only artist I know for sure is @kate-flournoy
ENFP - "One must be sane to think clearly, but one can think deeply and be quite insane."
May 6, 2017 at 7:55 am #32522Also, I was supposed to type “@daeus The over-lord’s an ENFP! *gasps*” back there. I think I was tired, cause duh he’s a villain. (did you know villain used to mean someone who owned a villa, and then it morphed into a bad guy because in all the works of fiction the bad guys were disgustingly rich people who owned villas)
ENFP - "One must be sane to think clearly, but one can think deeply and be quite insane."
May 6, 2017 at 8:08 am #32527So @daeus, I think I want to plan an ice cream party on the White House’s backyard for after you get inaugurated, or should I prudently plan the actual take-over first?
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May 6, 2017 at 8:35 am #32528@anne-of-lothlorien lol. Either one or both. They sound good.
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May 6, 2017 at 11:51 am #32537@Anne-of-Lothlorien You peaked my interest.
@Aratrea I’m sorry. 😀I present to you…Josiah the Wiser!
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May 6, 2017 at 11:55 am #32538@ethryndal Wow; I’m getting major “Russian author” vibes from that sketch, so it’s really hard for me to complain about having that look! 😛 Probably the closest to Dostoevsky I’ll ever get. 😉
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May 6, 2017 at 11:56 am #32539😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 Hahahahahahahahahaha!!!
Oh, it’s perfect. Very accurate portrayal too.
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May 6, 2017 at 12:19 pm #32540*screams*
@Ethryndal aaauuuuggghhhh!!! I’m dying! *chokes on her laughter and topples over off her chair and goes into spasms on the floor*PERFECT. Absolutely perfect.
May 6, 2017 at 12:55 pm #32543@aratrea Mayhaps I should say I’m sorry…
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May 6, 2017 at 1:47 pm #32548@Ethryndal XD XD XD That is amazing. @Aratrea you could put that as a picture with your credentials—Josiah the Wiser, on your video series or books of advice to growing writers. 😀
Btw @Anne-of-Lothlorien, @SleepwalkingMK is an ENFP. Also, if you’re not very extroverted, how do you know you aren’t an INFP? *wiggles eyebrows* Maybe you are. 😀 I’m pretty certain ENFPs aren’t terrified to talk to those they don’t know…
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