The Idea – Poem

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  • September 1, 2016 at 9:11 pm #16691
    BlueJay
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      Here’s another poem for critiquing.

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      (I’ve had to do it with a photo, so that it’s the right shape.) 🙂

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      September 1, 2016 at 9:12 pm #16692
      BlueJay
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        Sorry it’s on the side. I can’t rotate it. 🙁

        September 1, 2016 at 10:57 pm #16704
        ClaireC
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          @bluejay, Wow! this is fabulous! I love the way you go from one word, ‘nothing’, to lots and then one, ‘idea’ again at the end. 🙂

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          September 2, 2016 at 3:32 am #16710
          Sarah Hoven
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            @bluejay That’s cool! The shape is a lightbulb, right?

            September 2, 2016 at 3:38 am #16711
            BlueJay
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              @sarah-h Yep. 🙂

              September 2, 2016 at 9:25 am #16715
              Greta
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                @Bluejay Wow, I’m so impressed! That is SO cool. It looks like a lightbulb (I’m assuming that’s what you were aiming for 😉 ). Keep up the great work!

                September 2, 2016 at 9:31 am #16718
                Ingrid
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                  Wow, @bluejay! This is so good! And the shape…brilliant. 🙂

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                  September 2, 2016 at 9:52 am #16723
                  Snapper
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                    This poem describes my life…lightbulb!

                    @bluejay

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