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    Ellette Giselle
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      @elishavet-pidyon

      WHY would ANYONE in his right mind Say That?

      It’s Julian who needs this speech. Go ask him.

      He’s a little hot headed, he’s a firebrand, and he’s desperately excited to share the truth with his people.

       

      Anyway, you probably do all that in this book, and I am really enjoying reading this. So far cultures are fascinating and the character concepts are fantastic. Ok… I’ll go back and finish that section.

      Glad you’re enjoying it!

       

      Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

      #196849
      Elishavet Elroi
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        Ok! I read it. It’s good. They seem very inexperienced/in over their heads, but they’re handling it with humor so it’s funny. XD

        Although the wolves were scary. O.O XD

        Maybe I will ask him.

        *dons disguise as a character*

        “Julian, what were you thinking?” XD

        You have listened to fears, child. Come, let me breathe on you... Are you brave again? -Aslan

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        Ellette Giselle
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          @elishavet-pidyon

          Lol. Leon is more experienced than Julian. J will level out, he’s just excited and nervous and high strung and…. you get the point.

           

           

          Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God

          #196863
          hybridlore
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            @ellette-giselle

            *randomly pops in*

            Maybe having Leon point that out would help readers realize it more?

            'Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.'

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            Liberty
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              @ellette-giselle

              Sometimes love is dunderheaded!”

              *gagging at the reference*…

              "He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon

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