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February 1, 2025 at 11:54 am #196703
(I’m guessing you like boats and wolves?)
Wolves definitely are my favourite animal, this may or may not be evident in my writing. (More on that later.)
The boat thing was more of a joke. I a board game I play with my friends, there is an option to build sea vessels, but it is rarely done. On the occasion it does happen, it is a big deal, and cries of ‘Guys, is that a boat? Boat! Boat!!’ ring out around the table.
Glad you’re still staying with it!
You’re welcome!
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
February 1, 2025 at 11:55 am #196704It has to be that. Everything else looks Roman!
"He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon
February 1, 2025 at 11:55 am #196705HA! Got it!!
Ardentan’s have a French/Irish/English culture.
The Empire is German/Roman.
Turbans do not fit either of those.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
February 1, 2025 at 11:56 am #196706I guessed you like wolves!
ah, I see! What game?
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
February 1, 2025 at 11:57 am #196707Woohooooo!!!!!!! *victory dance*
So…you’re introducing a new people culture?
Oh, the romans/germans are called the Empire? Empirians? *cackling*
"He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon
February 1, 2025 at 11:59 am #196708It would be you who figured it out. Everyone else has read these books, and then you swoop in and find it! haha!
I am.
Empirians!
*dies*
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
February 1, 2025 at 12:28 pm #196709ah, I see! What game?
I don’t think it would be your thing. It’s a high fantasy 4X board game called ‘Heroes of Land, Air, and Sea.’ Think World fo Warcraft-type fantasy. It’s a game that takes 2-3, sometimes 4 hours to play.
Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to see the stars.
February 1, 2025 at 12:32 pm #196710Wait a minute… so, what?? You’re introducing like a middle-East themed culture??
'Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.'
February 1, 2025 at 12:35 pm #196711Yes, I thought of you as a quieter girl. Lover of books. Long light/medium brown hair. Writer, friendly, softer spoke.
*shrug*
Not sure if any of that is true. (except I know the hair isn’t.)
I mean yeah, that sounds pretty accurate. I may be more talkative than you pictured, but everything else sounds right.
Wait a second—what color do you think my hair is? Blonde? I thought it was kind of light brown.
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'Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.'
February 1, 2025 at 2:16 pm #196718I thought is was the same color as your pfp with the girl and the bookshelf. So a lighter medium brown.
Yes, a new culture.
Gak! Everyone is driving me nuts with all this pfp and name changing. I don’t know who anyone is anymore! *sob*
lololololol.
(did you draw that?)
Oh, sounds like something my dad would like.
wait…… how did you know I don’t like long games?
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