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    Ellette Giselle
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      Something I haven’t mentioned. I’m doing it between any possible sequel to CR.

      No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

      #200583
      Liberty
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        *squealing with excitement* I can’t wait to hear about it!

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          NEXT SECTION!!

          The next Sabbath, Hans did not return, but Julian was pleased to see Marius slip in and sit down. With him was a young man who appeared to be in his mid to late teens. Marius leaned over and whispered something to his companion who nodded. Julian turned his attention back to Leon, who was leading the morning worship.

          The small group of believers began to sing, and Julian joined them. He could feel the rush of strength and excitement flow through him. It was the way he always felt before charging into battle. Several boys had begun to drum a rhythm on benches and overturned crates, and the people began to stamp and clap. Julian felt the surge of adrenaline race through him, and he sang all the louder. When the girls broke off and began to echo the words of the men in a high harmoney, Julian was sure that in all the emperor’s palace, there was not a sound so beautiful as this worship.

           

          “Mighty Lord, extend Your kingdom,
          Be the truth with triumph crowned;
          Let the lands that sit in darkness
          Hear the glorious Gospel sound,
          From our borders, from our borders
          To the world’s remotest bound.

          By Your arm, eternal Father,
          Scatter far the shades of night.
          Let the great Immanuel’s kingdom
          Open like the morning light;
          Let all barriers, let all barriers
          Yield before Your heav’nly might.

          Come in all Your Spirit’s power;
          (in all Your Spirit’s power)
          Come, Your reign on earth restore.

           

          In Your strength ride forth and conquer,

          (Your strength ride forth and conquer,)

          Still advancing more and more,

           

          Till all people, till all people
          Shall your holy name adore.

          Till all people, till all people
          Shall your holy name adore.”

          When the time of singing had ended, Leon stood up and opened his Bible. “Today I want to read a passage the Lord impressed upon me. It is in the book of Isaiah, Chapter 50, starting in verse 5.” Leon cleared his throat and then began to read.

          “Behold, You shall call a nation that You do not know,
          and a nation that did not know You shall run to You…

          Leon continued to read, but those first few words stuck with Julain, and he turned them over and over in his mind. A nation that didn’t know God will run to Him. Could it be that we are part of that nation? Will the Empire turn?

          When the meeting ended, Julian made his way toward Marius. “It’s good to see you!” he exclaimed, slapping the young man on the back. “I am so glad you were able to return.”

          “It’s good to see you too, Julian,” Marius replied. “I would like you to meet a friend of mine, Wilhelm Baumann,”

          “It’s a pleasure to meet you. I’m Julian Damoss,” Julian said, shaking hands with Wilhelm.

          Wilhelm nodded and then stepped back. Julian noted he wore the garb of a stable boy and seemed a slightly ill at ease. It was no wonder, for he had probably been paranoid of people since he was young, knowing his masters could and would mistreat him if he didn’t do as he was told. The thought brought a flickering of anger with it as Julian thought of Leon. Julain forced the thought away. “I see by your dress that you work with horses. Do you like it?” he asked.

          Wilhelm shrugged.

          “I used to ride horses all the time, I know how much care they require. You must be well trusted to allowed around them,” Julian said.

          Wilhelm shrugged again.

          “Will you and Marius join us for a meal?” Julian asked.

          Wilhelm looked to Marius, who nodded. “It would be our pleasure.”

          Aelic joined them, and Marius introduced him to Wilhelm. Aelic began talking to the boy, and Wilhelm seemed a little less shy around him. They began to talk about horses, and Julian saw Wilhelm actually grin. The boy’s shoulders relaxed, and he began to talk with Aelic.

          Julian stepped to the side with Marius. “Where is he from?”

          “The palace. I met him when I was in the stables. He is a kind boy but does not get to go out very often due to his work,” Marius replied, quietly.

          “He seems shy,” Julian remarked.

          Marius nodded.

          “Speaking of the palace, how is the prince?” Julian asked.

          Marius’ face tightened. “He is no better.”

          “Did you get a chance to speak to him?” Julian asked.

          “Yes,” Marius replied.

          “And?”

          “He is intrigued.”

          “Does he seem open?”

          Marius shook his head. “No, he doesn’t. But he has not forbidden me to speak to him about it.”

          Julian nodded. He knew this would take time, but still, he was anxious to know what would happen in the future. He looked back at Wilhelm and Aelic. “I’m glad you brought him.”

          Marius smiled slightly. “I might as well try to touch the lives of all those in the palace. Not just the prince.”

          Wilhelm and Marius joined Julian, Leon, Roland, Aelic, and Rolf for the midday meal, and Julian was pleased to see some of Wilhelm’s shyness slipping away. He seemed to like Aelic and Leon the best.

          Julian wanted to ask Wilhelm what he had thought about the teaching that morning, but something told him to let it be.

          After the meal and some more time spent together, Wilhelm and Marius bid farewell and set out for the long walk home.

          “I hope he believes,” Julian said, watching their diminishing figures from the window.

          “So do I,” Leon said. “I like him very much, and someday I hope he will trust us and really open up. We talked for so long, yet I feel I barely know him.”

          “He must not be used to talking to strangers if he is a servant in the palace. Who knows what sort of punishment he would get for that,” Julian said.

          Leon’s face tightened and he nodded sadly.

          ***

          The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
          December 1st  
          The Empire

          To Amarin, Oswin, Clemens, and the church in Clonabay,

          Greetings in Christ.

          It has been too long since I last saw your faces, heard your voices, and fellowshipped among you. Roland and Aelic say the same and dearly miss you. Leon and Rolf tell me they long for another chance to fellowship with you and regret the shortness of the time they were able to spend among you. You will always be a church dear to my heart, for it was in Clonabay that I went through one of the greatest trials I have ever had to face— the loss of my dear brother Leon, and our companion Rolf. You were always there with me, helping me, and encouraging me in my time of deepest doubt and despair. I will forever thank God for your love and kindness to me. Though Leon and Rolf have now been restored to us, I will never forget the lessons I learned during that trial.
           I pray that you are all doing well, and we all continue to keep you in our prayers each day. I know that you are in a town full of darkness and evils of many kind. Yet, you are also in a town that men and women of all lands and nations pass through. You are a great light to many countries and nations, if only you will listen to the voice of God and do as He calls you to do. Be bold and let your lives shine for Christ. Do not fear. Be strong and courageous, for the Lord your God shall go with you. He will always be with you. Draw closer to one another during this time.
          You are soldiers and warriors for Christ. Wars are not won from safety and peace. Wars are won by those who go out into the streets and fight! This battle will be long, it will be wearisome. Trials and hardships will come. But in the end, Christ has already won, and we are merely fighting for the lives of those around us. We are safe, and God will deliver us from death and into eternal life. Be bold and speak with courage. Do not fear. Go out and preach the good news!
          Brothers and sisters, it is time to stop whispering. You live in a burning world, and there are people sleeping around you. It is only a matter of time before the roof caves in, and it’s all too late. But while there’s still time, what will you do? It is time to rise up and call out to those dying around us. Will you stand and watch this world burn, or will you rush into those flames and cry out to those around you to fly from this danger and death, and into the salvation that is waiting for them. Lift up your voices, church of God!
          We will pray for you, and we ask that you pray for us. Pray for our country, for our soldiers, for our Emperor and his son. Pray for the people of the streets and the people in the castles. Pray for us. May God’s peace be with you all.

          Your brother Julian, and the Church in the Capital

          ***

                      Time passed, and the days grew colder. It was harder to walk up and down the streets with the news of Salvation, for the air was sharp as a knife and the cold was brutal. Still, day after day, Julian, Leon, Rolf, Aelic and Roland trudged throughout the city, spreading the Word of God everywhere they went. The were cursed, praised, despised, believed, rejected, followed, loved, hated. Still, they pressed on, and slowly, the church grew.

          Marius continued to come to the Sabbath day meetings, and with him came Wilhelm. The stableboy was starting to relax around the companions, and Julian often saw him with Aelic, the two of them laughing wildly over some joke.

          Then, one Sabbath in the second week of December, Hans returned, and with him were his brothers— Kurt and Franz. That day, Hans accepted Christ as his savior, and three days later, he brought his brothers back to Leon and Julian. They spent many hours talking, and at the end of their time, Kurt and Franz also believed. Thus, three more were added to the church, and joy spread. Hans and his brothers where the type didn’t take things lightly. They saw what their salvation did for them, and they felt the Spirit of God in them. They wanted this for the soldiers around them, and so they started with their company of thirty. Every day, one or other of the brothers came to the inn with a soldier in tow.

          At first this unnerved Julian a little, but after a time he grew to expect the soldiers arriving an-announced and knew that he had nothing to fear from them.

          Two more weeks passed, and that Sabbath sixteen soldiers joined came to the meeting, and all but three believed. Those three returned to the inn and requested to talk with one or other of the five companions. By the middle of the week, they too had surrendered their lives to Christ. God’s Spirit was clearly at work, and it spread like lightning among the company of soldiers.

          One evening, the innkeeper’s wife came to the room where Leon and his companions had just finished supper. “There are two young men who wish to see you,” she said.

          “Please tell them to come in,” Leon replied.

          “Who is it?” Rolf wondered.

          “Most likely soldiers,” Julian chuckled,

          The innkeeper’s wife soon returned, and with her were Marius and Wilhelm. After the companions greeted them and the two were seated at the table, Leon spoke. “Tell us, to what do we owe the pleasure of this unexpected visit?”

          “Wilhelm asked to come and see you,” Marius replied, looking over at his companion.

          “What can we do for you, Wilhelm?” Julian asked, kindly.

          Wilhelm looked up at them and took a deep breath. He glanced at Marius, who nodded. “I have a confession to make.”

          Julian glanced at Leon.

          “Go ahead,” Leon said, gently.

          “I lied to you.”

          Leon raised an eyebrow. “About what?”

          Wilhelm took another breath to steady himself. “My name is not Wilhelm Baumann. I am Prince Dietrich, son of Emperor Haidronias.”

          There was a long, stunned silence. Leon felt his mind reeling. Prince Dietrich! A stable boy?

          Surprisingly, it was Aelic who found his voice first. “Why did you tell us your name was Wilhelm, and that you were a stable boy?”

          “Dietrich never said he was a stable boy,” Marius cut in. “I told you he was from the palace, which was true; and that he and I had met in the stables, which was true; and that he could not get out much due to his work, which is also true. He never answered any of your questions about being a stable hand, if you will remember, Julian. The only thing he lied about was his name.”

          What Marius said was true, and it silenced them all.

          “So… why? Why not tell us who you were?” Leon asked, after a long time.

          “I needed to see and hear the truth for myself. If I had come in as the prince, none of you would have treated me as I needed you too. I needed you to think of me as your equal, because I needed to see everything,” Dietrich said.

          “He has a point there,” Rolf admitted.

          “So, you really are Prince Dietrich” Julian asked in amazement.

          Dietrich smiled and nodded.

          “You aren’t really as shy as you acted,” Aelic said skeptically.

          Dietrich laughed. “No, I’m not. I wanted to listen more than speak. And if I talked, I would probably have to tell more lies to hide my identity, and I didn’t want to do that.”

          “Does your father know?” Leon asked.

          “He knows that Marius and I go out riding once or twice every week, but he doesn’t care what I do,” Dietrich replied.

          Julain didn’t know what to say, and he just stared at the stable-boy prince.

          At last, Leon found his voice. “So, after all this time, what conclusion have you come to about all of this?”

          Dietrich was silent for a long time, staring at the table. At last, he looked up. “I believe what you say is true.”

          Marius sucked in a quick breath, and Leon saw the joy that flooded his eyes. His own heart began to race. The future Emperor believed!

          Dietrich looked straight at Leon. “I want to believe. With all my heart, I long to follow Christ. But something is trying to hold me back.”

          “What is?” Leon asked.

          Dietrich looked away. “I’m afraid.”

          Leon leaned forward and laid a hand on the young man’s shoulder. “Tell us.”

          “It was a few months ago… my sixteenth birthday,” Dietrich said.

          Marius went ridged.

          Leon held his breath, knowing that Dietrich was on the edge of telling the horrible events that he had kept so secret.

          Dietrich took several deep breaths, and then he began. “The priests came for my inheritance ceremony. I was so frightened of them, and there was something so dark and evil about them… with them… in them. My father gave me over to them, and they took me. We came outside and entered a carriage. I was blindfolded, so I know nothing of where we went. We got out at our destination and came to a building. I remember the halls echoing and doors opening and closing. Then I was brought to what sounded like the center of a room and left there.” Dietrich fell silent.

          “What happened?” Leon asked, his voice tense.

          “I… I don’t remember everything. There was chanting and smoke, and strange perfumes, and everything was so dark. I couldn’t see anything because of the blindfold. I wanted to reach up and rip it off, but I was too terrified to move. I felt and heard the evil all around me, and it was crushing and suffocating. I don’t know how long that lasted. Then, someone grabbed me and dragged me deeper into the room. hands took my blindfold off, and I saw darkness, fire, and evil shadows. One of the priests cut my hand and forced me to press my palm against something, though I couldn’t see what it was. Then they began their chanting again.” Dietrich stopped, and closed his eyes, breathing slowly.

          Leon saw the horror and anger in Marius’s eyes, and he knew it reflected his own. He tightened his hold on Dietrich’s shoulder. “Tell us what they did.”

          Dietrich spoke, his voice barely above a whisper. “There were more voices, and then there was sharp pain. Someone yanked my head back and forced me to drink. Then they let me collapse to the floor. I lay there and begged the gods for death to end this horror. I remember nothing until I woke back in my own room.” His voice caught and his hands shook slightly.

          “I tried to forget, but the evil of that place still clings to me, and I still feel that darkness inside of me. That horrible night haunts my dreams. I fight them, and sometimes I get free, but then I am drowned and choked by the evil there.” Dietrich looked up at Leon. “I have to get free. I have to find Jesus, for I know He is the only one who can save me. But, every time I try to pray, a sickening terror fills me, and I don’t dare. I need you to help me. Please!”

          Leon nodded. “You are right, Dietrich. He is the only one who can save you. We will pray with you, but this is something you must do on your own. No one else can confess your sins and need of salvation”

          Marius put an arm about Dietrich’s shoulders. Aelic rose and laid a hand on his back, and Roland joined him. Julian reached and laid his hand on one of Diedrich’s shoulders, and Rolf placed a hand over the other. Closed his eyes and spoke. “Father God, we need You. You know the horrors Dietrich has endured, and the evil that has been inflicted upon him. You know Lord, You know.” Leon could feel Dietrich starting to tremble, and heard his breath quicken. “Lord Jesus, help us. We need You now. Come and save this boy. Heal him, Lord. Heal him and save him.”

          “I’m afraid,” Diedrich whispered. “What if He’s like them?”

          “You know the truth, Diedrich,” Leon said firmly. “Oh God, help him see the truth!”

          “I can’t! Oh God help me! Please help me!”

          Leon rested his hand over Dietrich’s head. “In the name of Jesus Christ, Son of the One true God, I break the chains of evil about this young man. In Jesus’ name, I command any and all powers of the devil to leave this place. He is not yours and never will be! What was done to him has no power against the name of Jesus Christ.”

          “Oh Lord! Jesus Christ, save me!” Dietrich cried out hoarsely. “Free me and save me! Rescue me from this darkness and save me. Help me! Help me to believe! I believe, Lord! You are the One true God, and there are no other gods. You alone can save, You alone are God. Oh God forgive me. Oh Lord, save me.”

          Dietrich covered his face with his hands, shaking and sobbing. Leon could hear the whispered prayers of those around him. He saw Marius pull the prince into his strong arms, his lips moving in fervent prayer. “Father, bring peace to us all. Fill Dietrich with Your Spirit and protect him from the evil one. Give him strength and courage. Help him to believe and never let go of You. Strengthen his faith.”

          Leon could feel the peace that filled the room, and he continued silently praying. At last, Dietrich lifted his head slowly sat up. His face was pale and streaked with tears, and his clothes were damp with sweat, but when he raised his head, no one could mistake the freedom and peace that filled his eyes. “Thank you,” he whispered. He covered his face with his hands. “Thank You Jesus! Thank You!” He wept softly, and Leon felt his own eyes fill with tears.

          At last, silence fell over the room, and Dietrich wiped his eyes and nose with his sleeve. “Thank you, Marius, for bringing me here,” he said, looking to his friend. “And thank you all for praying with me.”

          “Of course,” Julian said.

          “Welcome, little brother,” Leon said, slapping his shoulder.

          Diedrich smiled and then laughed. After a moment, he spoke. “It’s going to be hard, isn’t it.”

          “What is?” Julian asked.

          “Follow God and living in the palace.”

          Leon looked at Marius, who nodded slowly. “I’m afraid it will be,” Leon said.

          Dietrich took a deep breath. “The freedom and peace I have right now is something I could never give up.”

          “Is it something you are willing to die for?” Leon asked, soberly.

          Dietrich did not reply for a long moment. Then, he spoke. “I could never go back to that darkness I once lived in. It is better to die for what is true then live in a world built of lies. Yes, I would die for this.”

          “You must be ready, Dietrich. This will be hard. I don’t think your father will like this, and even if he doesn’t care, I know the priests will,” Leon said. “There will be festivals to the gods and ceremonies. It will be dangerous not to take part in these, but you must be fully God’s or not His at all. You cannot do both. When the time comes, will you stand your ground and trust God, no matter what happens and what they do to try and force you to give this up?”

          “Yes,” Dietrich replied firmly.

          Marius laid a hand on the prince’s shoulder. “I will stand with you to the end, Dietrich.”

          “Leon, what must I do?” Dietrich asked. “Now that I am a follower of Christ, what can I do to help the others?”

          “You must pray,” Leon said. “God will show you what to do. Shine as His light in the darkness of that palace. Live for Him.”

          Diedrich straightened. “One day, when I am Emperor, I will cleanse this land. I will destroy ever idol and temple. Every shrine and image. Everything that has anything to do with the wicked beliefs of this land.”

          “There will be much opposition to this, but I know that you will trust God through it all,” Leon said.

          They talked for another hour. Then, Prince Dietrich and Marius prepared to leave. Before they left, Julian ran upstairs. He returned with one of the last Bibles they had and gave it to Dietrich. “Read this often, and God will show you what to do.”

          Diedrich nodded and took it. “I will. Thank you.”

          Then he and Marius went out into the night.

          No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

          #200586
          hybridlore
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            @ellette-giselle

            Great section!! 🥰 I liked the Wilhelm-actually-Prince-Deitrich twist. Pretty cool that he’s now a Christian… but it’s going to be very dangerous.

            By the way, congrats on the publishing house! The website looks great!

            "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.

            #200587
            Ellette Giselle
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              @hybridlore

              I liked the Wilhelm-actually-Prince-Deitrich twist.

              Did you see it coming?!?!

              Linus will say he did. 100% 😂

               

              Pretty cool that he’s now a Christian… but it’s going to be very dangerous.

              Ya don’t say?……………

               

              😂

               

              Aw thank you!!!! I’m so glad! What do you think??!

              No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

              #200592
              hybridlore
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                @ellette-giselle

                No! But just watch him. XD

                I wasn’t expecting there to be a twist like that.

                 

                Yeah… 😅😬

                It looked really cool! It must have taken a long time to write out all the stuff on the pages. Did you design the website or have someone else help?

                "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.

                #200593
                Ellette Giselle
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                  Yay!! I’m glad I caught you by surprise at least. 😂

                   

                  It took about a month honestly. I learned web design so I could do it. I was motivated.

                  No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

                  #200594
                  hybridlore
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                    @ellette-giselle

                    Yep xD

                    Oh, wow! Cool!

                    For some reason, my phone just recommended me to type “Cadwicks” … 😂😂 Lol. Who knows why.

                    "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.

                    #200595
                    Ellette Giselle
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                      @hybridlore

                      Haha! You typed it a lot during TVON

                       

                       

                      No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

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                      hybridlore
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                        @ellette-giselle

                        Yeah… I guess I typed your name in your tag a lot before the Cadwicks. I don’t know. It just surprised me 😝

                        "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.

                        #200619
                        Liberty
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                          @ellette-giselle

                          “Careful?” Leon laughed. “Julain, I never thought those words would cross your lips.”

                          😂

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                          Ellette Giselle
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                            I know! It took Leon getting captured to sober him up a bit I guess.

                            No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

                            #200621
                            Liberty
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                              Wilhelm took another breath to steady himself. “My name is not Wilhelm Baumann. I am Prince Dietrich, son of Emperor Haidronias.”

                              That is so funny! When Wilhelm was first introduced, I actually thought, “That may be the prince…but in disguise!”

                              “One day, when I am Emperor, I will cleanse this land. I will destroy ever idol and temple.

                              Oooh!!! He’s about to become the Josiah.

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                              #200622
                              Ellette Giselle
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                                Really?!?! You called it?

                                 

                                Oooh!!! He’s about to become the Josiah.

                                Maybe so!

                                 

                                So, is he your new favorite? I was pretty sure he would be.

                                 

                                No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

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                                Ellette Giselle
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                                  NEXT SECTION!!

                                  The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
                                  December 10th
                                  The Empire

                                  To Johannes, Heinrich, and the brothers at the University,

                                  Greetings in the name of our Lord, Jesus Christ

                                  Such wonderful news! Prince Dietrich, son of Emperor Haidronias, has given his life to God! I can hardly believe what our Lord has done here! What glory and what power! Oh, to think, our land will one day be ruled by a follower of God! Pray for him. He is alone, but for a servant named Marius, and the Lord. He will need strength and courage in the days to come, for this will not be easy, and I am sure temptations will arise on every side, and in every form.
                                  Also, among us, are now twenty soldiers who have come to Christ— two thirds of Hans’ company! The light is braking through the darkness, and still the authorities have done nothing to stop us! Of course, there is opposition on the streets from people here and there, but nothing like what we had feared and prepared for. I confess, I did not expect to live long enough to write this letter to you. God has been very good to us.
                                  The church is slowly growing, and I am eager to see what God has in store for us. I wrote to tell you that we are in desperate need of more Bibles! If there is any way someone could bring more, then we urge and plead that you do so. The people are starving for the word of God, and we have given our last one to the Lieutenant of Hans’ company. I hope to visit you again. Perhaps sometime in the near future. I have been praying for your work, and I continue to do so. You are a bright light, and each one of you are strong warriors in Christ’s army. I pray that you will continue the work you have begun. I also urge you to remember to spend time in fellowship and worship together. What you are doing is invaluable, but do not do it at the cost of relationships with one another and God. Rest, fellowship, worship, learn, and pray together. And whatever you do, do all for the glory of God. I pray that we will be able to come to you soon. May God bless you and the work that you are doing.
                                  In Christ’s love,
                                  Leon and the brothers and sisters of the Capital.

                                  It was two weeks before the Bibles arrived with a letter from Heinrich and Johannes, telling of how the work was progressing, and thanking them for their letter. It was good to hear from their friends, and they sent greetings back with the young man who brought them the books.

                                  Julian, Leon and the others distributed many of the Bibles throughout those of the church who had none and saved the others for those who would come.

                                  During that time, Prince Dietrich joined them for another Sabbath day meeting, and before all those there, he professed his faith in Christ and revealed to them that he was the prince in disguise.

                                  To say that the other believes were surprised would be an understatement, and it was over thirty minutes before everyone quieted enough to begin the time of worship.

                                  Julian and the others had worked for over two months in the Capital, and they knew it was time to take greater steps. They began by speaking in inns and taverns. Often, they were chased out, but sometimes those there listened.

                                  “We need to do more,” Leon said. “It’s time to stand up and speak with boldness. It is time to speak in the squares and the markets. It is time to speak publicly and widely.”

                                  “I agree,” Rolf nodded.

                                  “So do I,” Julian said.

                                  Aelic and Roland did as well.

                                  “Let’s pray about this,” Leon told them.

                                  They spent two days in prayer, asking others to pray with them. Then, on the third day, they went out. Leon had chosen to speak first, and the others would stay with the crowd, talking with them and explaining things.

                                  As the others finished breakfast, Leon went away to read his Bible and pray alone, and Julian went upstairs to his journal.

                                   

                                  The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
                                  January 5th
                                  The Empire

                                  Today, Leon is going to the market on the east side of the city to speak to the people. To say that I am not frightened would be a lie. I am very afraid for Leon, and I wonder if this will be where it all ends. If it is, I am afraid to let him face it alone. Oh Lord, protect us, give us courage and strength, and may Your will be done. Father, whatever happens today, may it be for Your glory alone. Prepare the hearts of the people who will be there. Let us be a light for You. Father, we give ourselves, this day, and all that we have to You. Use it as You will.

                                  ~Julian

                                  Julian set down the quill and let the paper dry. Then, he closed the book and put it away in his rucksack. “Julian,” Leon called, from downstairs. “Are you ready?”

                                  “Yes, I’m coming,” Julian replied. He took one last look around, snatched up his hat, scarf, and gloves, and grabbed his thick cloak from the wall. Downstairs, he found the others waiting for him. Julian fastened his cloak and then pulled on his hat and gloves. He wound his scarf about his neck as Leon spoke. “Let’s pray one more time before we go out.”

                                  They gathered together and prayed for Leon, each other, and for the people they were about to speak to. The innkeeper and his wife met them at the door. He shook their hands, and his wife had tears in her eyes as she bid them farewell. “Don’t be afraid,” Leon told them. “Whatever happens is in God’s hands. We will meet again.”

                                  Then the five stepped outside into the cold streets and walked to the east-end market. When they arrived, the place was bustling with the morning trade. Leon looked toward the platform that the emperor’s men and the priests made announcements from. He took a deep breath and looked back at his friends. “May the Lord’s will be done.”

                                  They nodded, and Julian embraced him quickly. Leon slapped him on the back and then let go. He smiled at Julian and then turned and climbed the platform. Taking a deep breath, he shouted “People of the Empire! Men and women of the Capital. Today I bring you a warning, and a message of hope!”

                                   

                                  ***

                                              The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
                                  January 6th  
                                  The Empire

                                  To the church in the Village of Dietenbruck,

                                  Greetings in Christ.

                                  We have completed the journey to the Capital and have been here for a while. We have left several churches in our wake, and for that I thank God. Rolf and Roland send their love and greetings to Mr. Klein, Ernst, and Liesl. We continue to keep you in our prayers, and we have confidence you do the same for us. We miss you all dearly. You were the first church in all the Empire, but by far not the last! I pray that you will continue in your faith and follow in the ways our Lord has set before you. You may be small, but God will use each and every one of you for His glory, and your work will not be in vain. I pray that you continue to strengthen one another in the faith and continue constantly in the reading of God’s Word. We pray that God will give us a chance to come and visit with you again. We have many stories to share with you, and I am sure you have many for us.
                                  Our time in the Capital has been fruitful, and God has worked many wonderful things. Yesterday, Leon spoke publicly to a crowd in the eastern market. They actually listened to him, and several people asked to hear more. We were afraid of opposition from the priests or the soldiers, but so far, we have received none.
                                  An entire company of soldiers in the Imperial army have now come to faith, the last two believed last night in the market. And one of the servants of the palace also believes, as well as Prince Dietrich himself!
                                  Pray for us, and all of them. Pray that we will continue to seek God’s will in what lies ahead.

                                  Blessings in Christ,
                                  Julian and the church of the Capital.

                                  ***

                                              Julian spoke in the Western market the following day. Then Roland took the North, and Rolf the south. More and more were believing, and word was spreading. Julian saw a few soldiers standing to the side and watching when Roland spoke. When Rolf was speaking, he saw more soldiers and several priests. Then, Leon told them he felt God calling him to go and speak in the city square.

                                  The next morning, they set out. When they arrived, the place was full of people. Julian felt like he could hardly breathe, there were so many people going this way and that. Pushing, shoving, walking, running, buying, selling–– the place was packed.

                                  They finally made their way to the platform. There were supposed to be a set of steps that were placed there by the soldiers when someone high rank needed to use the platform. These steps were removed to keep commoners off the platform. Leon reached up and grabbed the edge of the structure. “Hoist me up.”

                                  Rolf and Julian each grabbed one of his legs and lifted. Leon scrambled for a hand hold and rolled onto the platform. He stood up and paused to catch his breath. “Thanks,” he grinned.

                                  Leon cupped his hands around his mouth. “People of the Empire! I bring you tidings of great joy, and a message of hope!”

                                  Several people turned to look up, surprised by the unexpected presence of someone on the platform. Then a few began shouting that the strange speakers had come. Others shushed them and still more drew near. Soon there was a small crowd at the base of the platform, and Leon began. He told of the creation of the earth, sin and the fall, and the promise of a Savior. More and more gathered to listen, and Julian and his companions began to wonder through the crowd, talking with the people and explaining things.

                                  After about an hour of this, Julian glanced up and froze. At the edge of the crowd were several priests, and with them stood two army captains. Soldiers stood around the perimeter of the crowds, along with the temple troops. Julian felt a chill run through him.

                                  He watched as the priests spoke angrily with the soldiers, constantly glaring toward where Leon stood. Julian looked back toward Leon, wondering if there was any way to warn him, and what he should do. He saw Leon’s gaze drifting over the crowd, and Julian saw him pause and look toward the growing threat, though he never once stopped speaking. He watched for a few moments and then looked to where Julian stood. Leon nodded slightly, then, he looked back to the people.

                                  “The religion of the Empire is a religion of lies, slavery, and death. It is a false religion, and it demands much of you while never giving anything in return,” Leon said. “The priests control you by fear, telling lies that gain them power and riches. The gods are made by the hands of men, and they are nothing but wood, stone, and metal. There is only One true God. He is the one I have been telling you of! He gives life, forgiveness, salvation, and freedom to all who ask. All you must give is your loyalty and your hearts.”

                                  Julian watched as the priests gestured angrily at Leon. One of the captains turned and shouted an order, and several soldiers began to push through the crowd. Julian bit his lip until it bled. “Oh God help us. Help Leon!”

                                  Leon’s eyes darted to the soldiers for a moment, and then back to the people. “We have all sinned, and we all deserve death. Not one of us is righteous, and not one of us can save ourselves. We have sinned, and the punishment for sin is death. But God sent His only Son to die for us, and by His blood we are made clean. By His sacrifice, we are forgiven and made new. All you must do is confess your sins, call upon the name of the Lord, and you will be saved! He will forgive you, save you, and set you free! Never again will you have to pay atonement, sacrifices, or gifts to a god. They are not gods, and the One true God already paid the price for you! Come to Him! Come and you will live! He will save you from the punishment of death! Though you die here, you will live again with Him in the place He has prepared for you!”

                                  The soldiers had reached the platform. “Cease your talking and come down now!” one shouted.

                                  Leon ignored them. “God has given me freedom! Christ Jesus has given me life! He alone do I serve! He is my God, and I am His!”

                                  “Come down or we’ll make you!” another soldier commanded.

                                  “It is not too late,” Leon continued. “But, not one of us knows what the next moment may bring! Do not delay, for you know not when your life will end. If I die here today, I know I will live with Christ forever. What will happen to you if you die? Do not wait!”

                                  The soldiers had clearly finished waiting, and now several were hoisting companions up onto the platform.

                                  Julian couldn’t breathe, and he clenched his fists so tightly that his nails drew blood from his palms.

                                  Leon ignored the soldiers and kept on going. “Call upon the name of the Lord, and you will be saved. He will take you as His own, and He will hide you under the shelter of His wings. He will never leave you or forsake you. He will forever be at your side, no matter what may come!”

                                  Leon’s words were lost as two of the soldiers tackled him from behind and pinned down. They bound his hands roughly behind his back striking him several times as they did.

                                  Julian watched in anguish and tears blurred his vision. “Oh God help him,” he whispered.

                                  One of the soldiers yanked Leon up to his knees, and the other–– one of the temple troops–– drew his sword. “Who are you!” he shouted.

                                  “I am Leon Fischer,” Leon replied calmly.

                                  “How dare you speak against the gods! You are in the Empire, fool!” the guard spat.

                                  “This Empire belongs to the One true God and He alone do I serve. He has called me here to bring the truth to His people,” Leon replied, loud enough for all to here.

                                  The man pressed the tip of his blade to Leon’s chest, hard enough to draw a trickle of blood. Leon did not cower but looked the guard straight in the eyes.

                                  No one spoke, and the crowd held its breath, waiting in thrilled silence to see how this drama would end. “Leon Fisher, take back these vile words of blasphemy or pay the price,” the guard snarled.

                                  “I will not,” Leon retorted.

                                  A gasp rippled through the crowd, and a few cried out in astonishment.

                                  “Kill him!” one of the priests yelled.

                                  “No! Don’t kill him. Flog him and let that be a warning,” one of the captains retorted.

                                  “Run him through!” another priest screeched.

                                  “We have no cause to kill him,” the other captain shouted. “Give him fifty lashes and jail him.”

                                  The crowd gasped.

                                  Julian felt like he was going to be sick. Oh God please!

                                  The soldiers on the platform dragged Leon to his feet, and one of them stripped off his hat, scarf, and cloak. As they began to tear off his shirt, a voice rang out from behind the crowd. “Unhand him!”

                                  Everyone spun about, and cries of astonishment filled the air. There were four soldiers and a young man on a brown horse. In front of them, a boy dressed in gold and black with a mask over his face held the rains of a black stallion, who chomped against the bit and pranced in place.

                                  “It’s the prince!” several people cried, and the crowd scattered to let him through.

                                  Prince Dietrich road through the crowd and came to the foot of the platform. “Did you not hear me?” he demanded.

                                  “You Highness,” one of the guards said. Three of them bowed low, while the other kept a hand on Leon, dipping his head.

                                  “I said, let the prisoner go,” Dietrich repeated.

                                  “But your High––”

                                  “Unbind him and let him go,” Dietrich commanded. “Or do you dare to defy your prince?”

                                  The soldier shook his head and then nodded. One of the men cut Leon’s hands free, and then they let him go and stepped back.

                                  Leon gave Dietrich a relieved grin. “Thank you, your Highness.”

                                  Marius rode to the princes’ side and pulled his horse to a stop, looking up at Leon in concern. Dietrich rose in the stirrups and held out a hand. Leon stepped forward and grasped it, and Dietrich leapt up out of the saddle. Marius leaned over and grabbed his stallion’s rains before the horse could bolt.

                                  Leon pulled the prince up onto the platform, and Dietrich turned to face the crowd, raising a hand to silence their surprised chatter. “Listen to me, people of the Empire,” he called out.

                                  Silence fell, and every eye turned to the prince.

                                  Diedrich spoke. “I am Prince Dietrich, son of Emperor Haidronias, and I stand before you today a new creation! I am free because of Leon and those with him, and their boldness to speak the truth, but even more than that, I am free because of what Jesus Christ did for me.”

                                  Dietrich took a deep breath and then reached up toward his mask. As he lowered it from his face, the crowd cried out in fear and astonishment, and several people screamed, while others threw their hands up to shield their faces.

                                  “Look at me!” Dietrich cried out. “I am no god! Nor do I have any gods or goddesses in my line! Look at me! I am a boy. I am just like each of you. No great power has been given to me! No reverence to me is due! I am the same as each one of you.” He lifted his mask and flung it away from him. It fell and shattered on the cobblestones below. The sound was defining in the silence.

                                  “I stand before you today, a mortal man, with no power in his blood,” Diedrich continued. “And I am here to tell you that I believe! I believe in the One true God, and His Son, Jesus Christ! I believe in Him with all my heart, and I have been saved. I am a new creation in Christ! The old has passed away. I am free!”

                                  He held out his hand toward Leon. “He tells the truth! Leon has come here to bring us the truth and light that God has sent Him to give. He speaks of the only way of freedom, salvation, and redemption.” The prince spun and pointed a finger toward the enraged and stunned priests. “They lie!” he yelled. “They tangle you and ensnare you in their webs of lies! They have built an Empire of deceit, feeding on your fear, and prospering from your blindness. They will destroy you! They offer nothing but darkness and death. But Jesus Christ offers life! He is the way the truth and the life, and there is no other way. Come to Him and be saved.”

                                  The crowd was stunned to silence.

                                  Dietrich crouched on the edge of the platform and, with Leon’s help, carefully slid down onto his stallion. He took the rains back from Marius with a nod.

                                  Leon pulled his cloak, hat, and scarf back on, and then slid off the platform, dropping down a short distance from the prince. He walked over and looked up and Dietrich. “Well done.”

                                  Dietrich smiled. “I thank God he had me ride out today.”

                                  “So do I,” Leon laughed. “Thank you for saving me from a very nasty encounter.”

                                  “You’re welcome,” Dietrich said. He turned his horse and road back through the crowd, Marius at his side. The people backed away, some staring up at the prince in awe, while others still shielded their faces.

                                  Leon walked over to where Julian and his friends stood. “Come, let’s go while they’re still stunned.”

                                  They quietly left while the crowd’s attention was still on the prince. When they were safe, Julian let out a breath of relief. “Leon, thank God!”

                                  Leon laughed shakily and slapped Julian on the back. “I’m alright. God was watching out for us.”

                                  “Your lip is bleeding,” Rolf remarked.

                                  “Is it?” Leon asked. “My face is so cold I can’t feel anything.”

                                  “Let’s get inside and have something hot to eat,” Roland suggested.

                                  “Yes. And thank You Lord for sending Prince Dietrich to save Leon,” Rolf added.

                                  “Yes Lord and thank You for giving him the courage to stand up and speak what he believed,” Leon agreed.

                                  The five friends returned to the inn, full of thanks. But Leon knew they had now made enemies.

                                  Nothing would ever be the same.

                                   

                                   

                                  No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

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