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@ellette-giselle exactly!
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
shooting stones
Do you have an actual game this is based off?
“A story of a great warrior hero who loves children and saves his bride,” Julian repeated. He looked at Roland who gave him a smile. “I think I know just the story.”
Aww!!!😍 I love this part!
“You do that,” Aelic replied coldly.
I’m pretty sure Aelic is remembering the priest from his town when he says this…and how that guy wanted to sacrifice him!
His wife, Adeline,
ADELINE!!!!!
"He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon
“Shooting stones” sounds like something along the lines of marbles, maybe?
"When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers
Do you have an actual game this is based off?
There were several games like this medieval children played, and later on they evolved to Jacks and Marbles. So in a way, yes.
Aww!!!😍 I love this part!
Me too! So glad!!
I’m pretty sure Aelic is remembering the priest from his town when he says this…and how that guy wanted to sacrifice him!
Yeah, I’d say that’s a safe bet,
ADELINE!!!!!
Is that one of your characters too?
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
Great section! I too loved the part where they told the children about Jesus. I’m excited to see if/how Leon reaches Ian.
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seems to be a mutual favorite!
Looks like that scene is a good one. 😁
I’m excited to see if/how Leon reaches Ian.
you may regret saying that…………..
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.