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February 1, 2025 at 10:57 am #196662
Haha. I was more riled up about the insult to my brothers, not to me. haha!
And I believe the Scottish jab was a playful one. *shrug* I have no hard feelings towards him, and he has none towards me.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
February 1, 2025 at 10:59 am #196663I really like it!! I’m seeing a lot of battle, soldiers, and little girls… hmm… 🤔
'Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.'
February 1, 2025 at 11:00 am #196664oh it was super tough. I decided that you had brown hair, a friendly, cheerful, slightly more outgoing personality. Loved animals, lived in the country, and liked western/countryish style clothing.
*shrug*
I decide lots of things about people I don’t know because me mind likes to have a face to go with a name, and when I don’t have one, I view what I know as the building blocks to a character. XD
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
February 1, 2025 at 11:00 am #196665Haha. I was more riled up about the insult to my brothers, not to me. haha!
I kind of thought so.
And I believe the Scottish jab was a playful one. *shrug* I have no hard feelings towards him, and he has none towards me.
I was still really new to KP…so I wasn’t sure at that time…I was thinking, “Woah…that was intense.”😂
"He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon
February 1, 2025 at 11:01 am #196666oh it was super tough. I decided that you had brown hair, a friendly, cheerful, slightly more outgoing personality. Loved animals, lived in the country, and liked western/countryish style clothing.
You’re actually correct on all those things except the brown hair! Good deductions!
"He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon
February 1, 2025 at 11:02 am #196667Ha!! Power and I go at one another now and then, but we’re friends. He actually is the one who got me into doing medieval swordplay.
I think our personalities clash, and people who don’t know us think it’s a fight, when really we’re just sparing.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
February 1, 2025 at 11:03 am #196668I know! I think I did a pretty good job!
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
February 1, 2025 at 11:03 am #196669battle?
hmmmm.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
February 1, 2025 at 11:03 am #196670Yes…I got that feel after a while. (that you were only sparring)
"He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon
February 1, 2025 at 11:05 am #196671So, what do you think of the mood board for the book? Any ideas/deductions/predictions?
also, do you have any questions for me concerning anything that may have happened in the other books or points you’re confused on?
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
February 1, 2025 at 11:05 am #196672Hah, you always say that whenever I guess at what’s going to happen. But you do try to throw me off a lot, so I’m just not going to listen. 😅
'Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.'
February 1, 2025 at 11:07 am #196673well, you might want to look again. I don’t see any battle scenes………..
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
February 1, 2025 at 11:09 am #196674'Whoever dwells in the shelter of the Most High will rest in the shadow of the Almighty.'
February 1, 2025 at 11:26 am #196675I was just planning to get to that! So…you have ship in it??!!! Cool! Maybe a Paul scene? (These are my random thoughts…)
Uh oh…I see an arena…don’t tell me they get thrown into that…and wolves…*gulp* hopefully, they’re nice wolves?? I always love nice wolf characters…I see a lot of young children…oh, someone gets captured, oh, and flogged. *ouch*
Does Julian like horses?
So, which brother is the more outgoing, and which one is the more quiet one? I’m assuming Leon is the quiet one? Are they twins? Who’s older?
There’s a fire as well…looks like a lot of terrible thing happen.
"He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon
February 1, 2025 at 11:27 am #196676Those are men marching.
I don’t see any actual combat.
Man is born for the fight, to be forged and molded into a sharper, finer, stronger image of God
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