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    hybridlore
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      @ellette-giselle

      *huffs, sits down to wait patiently for next section* Fine then.

      "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.

      #199371
      Ellette Giselle
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        @linus-smallprint

        Hello, nice to see you around.

        Girls are weird.

        *indignant gasp* how dare you!

        😂

         

        For some reason I started to imagine Hassan as Middle Eastern when you mentioned his name. Probably wearing a turban of sorts.

        Well that is exactly how you should picture him! Bravo! 👏🏻

        (if you look back at the story moodboard you may catch a glimpse of him.)

         

        So, it’s basically crucifixion, except you don’t get the nails, and you get to stand on the ground. That’s got to be a ‘fun’ experience.

        eh. yeah. Just about.

         

        I’m kind of wondering what’s going through Rolf’s head right now. He’s still kind of new to this, even if he has been a Christian for half a year now.

        I thought about having a POV for him….. but that will start fracturing into lots of POVs and the question will be, “Why Rolf over Aelic and Roland?” and then I’ll have five POVs going.

         

        This section, good for the characters? No. Good for character development and overall story? Yes.

        Well thanks! I was hoping to throw an interesting loop to make this book feel very different from the others.

        (might have gotten most of my story-line inspiration from the book of Acts)

        Anyhow.

        No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

        #199372
        Ellette Giselle
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          @hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

          For anyone who is interested…..

           

          Hassan (center) and two of the other slave traders.

          (and yes, they are in their native country in this picture)

           

           

          No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

          #199373
          hybridlore
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            @ellette-giselle

            Wow. Aladdin vibes.

            "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.

            #199374
            Liberty
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              @ellette-giselle

              Wow. Yup. Has some similarities to Papa.

              "He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon

              #199375
              Liberty
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                @ellette-giselle

                I feel like you should be like this:

                 

                 

                e

                I feel like you should be like this:

                "He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon

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                Keilah H.
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                  @liberty that must be weird.

                   

                  imagine showing your dad that picture and saying “My online friend made a bad guy who has your name.”

                   

                  Don’t do that lol

                  "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                  #199377
                  Liberty
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                    @hybridlore

                    I already attempted to do so and got out-debated. She took fake-Alec. 😖

                    Wait, what does that mean? Who’s fake-Alec?

                    You don’t care about Leon?

                    I do! I do! Just…maybe I like Rolf better??🫣

                    "He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon

                    #199378
                    Liberty
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                      @keilah-h

                      😂 I think he’ll think it’s funny. And he might even be pleased that something picked a name like his for a book character…even if they’re a bad guy…

                      "He who never quotes will never be quoted." ~Charles Spurgeon

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                      Keilah H.
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                        @liberty lol

                        "When in doubt, eat cheese crackers."-me to my charries who don't even know about cheese crackers

                        #199380
                        hybridlore
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                          @liberty

                          Long story. If you read back, it’s just on the last page or two. She tried to steal my character Alec to stop me from taking hers, but then I said Alec was too far away for her to take him, so we agreed that it was a misunderstanding and she’d kidnapped some random bystander.

                          That’s funny. I like Leon better 😝

                          "Don't shine so that others can see you. Shine so that through you, others can see Him." ~ C. S.

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                          Ellette Giselle
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                            @hybridlore

                            Well, I’ve never seen that movie. Just heard of it. And I like the song “Speechless” but other than that I know nothing of it besides it taking place in Arabia.  lololol.

                             


                            @liberty

                             

                            But that IS how I feel!!!!

                            No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

                            #199404
                            Ellette Giselle
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                              @hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

                              For all those it may concern…. I would call this the theme song if this book.

                               

                              No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

                              #199405
                              Ellette Giselle
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                                @hybridlore   @linus-smallprint      @liberty

                                 

                                How about this one?

                                No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

                                #199406
                                Ellette Giselle
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                                  @hybridlore   @linus-smallprint       @liberty

                                   

                                  Look y’all, whatever you may think…. this is actually the truth.

                                  No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.

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